Reviews for A Walk in the Park by Avi

DragonChuu (Chapter 3) - Sat 05 Jan 2019

Amazing story! I'm loving how it is evolving! please, keep up the good work ♥


KEdakumi (Chapter 3) - Sat 05 Jan 2019

Sesshoumaru seems to think she is acting immature about Inuyasha, but he should realize that he and Inuyasha had a lot longer time to move on then she did.  As far as she knew, Inu was dead. She was mourning.  Now suddenly he's not.   Talking about him was basically a time warp for her emotions. Like she said, he knew when and where she was, but he did worse then breaking her heart...he let her suffer and do it basically alone.  How could any of her family relate to what she went through there? Who else could she talk to?  She really could not have logically expected him to wait for so long alone, but the passing of  time is such a difficult concept to wrap one's head around, particularly if you are used to moving at the speed of 500 years in a minute.

Did Shippo not seek her out or ask about her time?

Just my thoughts...Can't wait to see what happens next.


ashuhhleey (Chapter 2) - Tue 01 Jan 2019

Is it really considered a "betrayal" if Inuyasha's had 500 years to move on with his life, while it's only been six years for Kagome? Still, even then she had a lot of time to try to move on with her own life. I was kinda hoping there was going to be no character bashing or whiny Kagome in this fic, and I hope I'm right and it stays that way.


sesskagaddict87 (Chapter 2) - Mon 31 Dec 2018

If this is truly your first fanfic I'm incredibly impressed. Even two chapters this is going to be a good one and one I'm going to be looking forward to refresh my page often. Can't wait for the next chapter and see how Shippo and Kirara is doing.


Toni (Chapter 2) - Mon 31 Dec 2018

still can't wait for more  


ashuhhleey (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 Dec 2018

I'm really liking this so far. Keep up the good work! =)


Toni (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 Dec 2018

just read this chapter  thoroughly enjoyed it and looking forward to more chapters  

please update soon  

and happy new year


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Dec 2018

I like your story thus far.

It is well written and I have seen the name Nishimura used maybe once or twice as a surname for Sesshomaru in other stories.

My only favorite pairing is S/K in this fandom, although I have read a few other pairings for Kagome which I couldn't quite wrap my head around.

Anyway, I am looking forward to reading more of this story and I hope you update soon. 

Please don't abandon it.  :)

Great writing.

Cheers and welcome to Dokuga!!!


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