???? He's starting to panic and doesn't even realize it.
Like I said, I absolutely love what you're doing with this story. The elevator portion was absolutely lovely to read. One comment: I think you wrote "licked" instead of "liked" once, so you may want to fix that.
(Ie: "So, he did what every respectable man would do in his position. He rented a room in a luxury hotel and celebrated New Year. Fast and hard. Just the way he liked it.)
I only mention it because I remeber you telling me about your English! I can't wait to read more :)
That elevator ride was hilariou! This story is a pure joy to read. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Jamie (Chapter 2) - Sun 16 Dec 2018
LMAO omg... Never thought an elevator could be so amusing!! Soo looking forward to the next chapter!
Orotami (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Dec 2018
Love it. Cant wait for more!
I love this story so far! It's hilarious! Sesshomaru the party planner! I love it! I can't wait to read more!
KH ^_^
I had to laugh at that to do list. I thought it was too funny!
Inuyaoi (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 Dec 2018
"She, he or they." LOL How progressively hilarious. I'm always in the mood for fluff with humor. Looking forward to more.
Jamie (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 Dec 2018
Love that "list! Looks like something I would do... lol. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Nallely (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 Dec 2018
I usually don't leave a review until the second chapter but this looks pretty interesting, hope you update soon!!
I like where this is heading. Please update soon.
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