Very interesting so far, I like how you used the hell hounds instead of the Yomotsu-hisame in your mythology tale. Inus are far better than hags in my opinion. It will be interesting to see where you take this. The only mistake I found in the tale was with Amaterasu, which it was just the spelling. When I read it, it gave me a pause as I tried to think what God you where talking about. Lol But other than that everything was great! Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more. :D
Very interesting start... I wonder, though- that blue flame... couldn't be related to the fiery spirit of a certain miko, could it? And Sesshomaru... stubborn as ever. I look forward to seeing what draws him out!
I am very intrigued by this story. I recently read part of the myth in another story I read and found it very interesting.
Your story has me fascinated and would like to read more because I believe I am going to enjoy it very much.
There are a few missing prepositions and repeating words here and there but it was still a nice chapter.
I like your version of Totosai...always knew he wasn't as dense as he pretends to be. lol :)
I wonder how Kagome will figure into the story.
Looking forward to future updates. I hope you update soon and if you can...a little longer chapters...hehehe ;)
Just asking. :)