Peach (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Nov 2018

Very interesting so far, I like how you used the hell hounds instead of the Yomotsu-hisame in your mythology tale. Inus are far better than hags in my opinion. It will be interesting to see where you take this. The only mistake I found in the tale was with Amaterasu, which it was just the spelling. When I read it, it gave me a pause as I tried to think what God you where talking about. Lol But other than that everything was great! Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more. :D


Nallely (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Nov 2018

Ok I need more please, very interesting, hope you update very very soon!


SammyJams (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Nov 2018

What an awesome beginning! Can’t wait to read more! 


Keo (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Nov 2018

I'm hooked! Can't wait for the next update!


Dawn Peyser (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Nov 2018

Love to read the next chapter. Would like to see how Kagome is placed in the story. 

Updated soon.

 


Jamie (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Nov 2018

Very interesting start... I wonder,  though- that blue flame...  couldn't be related to the fiery spirit of a certain miko, could it? And Sesshomaru... stubborn as ever. I look forward to seeing what draws him out!


Kris (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Nov 2018

Cool story!  I liked totasai character in this.  The story about the gods was really interesting.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Wed 31 Oct 2018

This story sounds interesting, please update the next chapter quickly!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Wed 31 Oct 2018

I am very intrigued by this story.  I recently read part of the myth in another story I read and found it very interesting.

Your story has me fascinated and would like to read more because I believe I am going to enjoy it very much.

There are a few missing prepositions and repeating words here and there but it was still a nice chapter.

I like your version of Totosai...always knew he wasn't as dense as he pretends to be.  lol  :)

I wonder how Kagome will figure into the story.

Looking forward to future updates.  I hope you update soon and if you can...a little longer chapters...hehehe ;)

Just asking.  :)


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