Well it seems the dummy went and done it. Kaoru couldn't keep his big mouth shut and had to get the last say in. :(
He needs to face some sort of consequence for his stupidity.
Anyway, now the adventure begins.
Nice writing and well done.
Can't wait for more chapters.
Cheers!!!
Nilee1 (Chapter 8) - Mon 12 Nov 2018
OMG Who did that idiot release?
How can you stop here TT__TT
OMG, I'd beat the hell out of that girl... Disrespecting a shrine and its contents then calling Kagome baka-chan really I face plant her so why doesn't Kagome do something about it instead of being miss scaredy pants... Please don't make Kagome out to be a weak person that totally sucks if that happened. What the girl is going to read aloud the scroll and let the dragons free. boy oh boy what a day... lol
update soon
Sorry about referencing Kaoru as 'she' instead of 'him'. I wasn't sure of the gender until I read the summary again.
And I didn't mean to imply that the entire class had manners unbecoming of young college adults...it just seems to be Kaoru. LOL :)
Again, sorry about that. :|
Are these people suppose to be young college age adults? :|
Kaoru acts like a jealous trouble-making middle schooler. She makes you want to knock her the hell out. She has a very irksome attitude and personality but she makes a good antagonist to push the story along though.
Interesting story and actually looking forward to more updates to see where you take this.
Nice writing!
This sounds fun already
Ooh this is a good start! I can’t wait to see what happens :).
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