This is beyond good.
The story flows so smoothly and I'm readlly enjoying it. Can't wait to see how Sesshomaru tries to break free of the effects Kagome is already having on him and how he will hadnle his beast's jealousy of other males that are interested in Kagome being around her. Please update soon.
snow (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Oct 2018
I see you restarted this story, so far the flow seems much better. I can tell some differences in the story. can't wait to read more. are you still considering writing a prequel of this story?
Uh oh! Can’t wait to see the drama unfold in the next chapter with this new female character!
Nile (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 Sep 2018
I remember reading the other and wanting to know where it went, as I definitely had it bookmarked to follow.
Glad this is back.
I'd love to know what happened while she was gone to give her such formal training. And she said she claimed 2 youkai children? Shipp and who? And did Sesshoumaru miss that point?
Can't wait to see what happens next
Love the rewrite
This story sounds interesting, please update the next chapter quickly!
I like the way you started this fic. I look forward to more chapters.
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