Awesome! I was really excited when I saw that the prompt was going to continue. While I was reading the prompt, I had thought it could make for a great and interesting story and wished for it to continue. I like where you have taken it so far. I have a question. I’m new to this site. Does this site allow someone to follow stories like fanfiction.com so when a new chapter is posted, an email would be sent with the update? Thanks for taking the time to read this.
I love it, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Izzy (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Jul 2018
This is great!
VS (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Jul 2018
Sorry, I did a mistake in my review before: I mentioned the removing of the jewel, but that part was in Chie's work ... well, take it as a compliment, it is a sign, that both works fit perfectly together!!!!
Sorry again.
VS (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Jul 2018
Hello,
I was first hesitant ro read this work, because Chie is one of my favourite writers, and I was afraid you would ruin her work...but I have to say you did a really good job with this!!! It fits perfectly as an continuation!
I really laughed about Kagome's description of Sesshoumaru: a man with white hair and a green whip :D ... this is just awesome ... and accurate :P
And it didn't go unnoticed that it is Sesshoumaru who has the jewel now ... he didn't give it back ... thief ... also his way to remove it wasn't really gentleman like ;)
Am I right in my assumption that this is not the ending? Otherwise I believe you wouldn't mention the crows ;)
Well, you spiked my interest and I'm looking forward to future updates!
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