Reviews for Yokai Manor by Inuyaoi

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Koree (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Aug 2018

Yay they finally met !!! 


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 7) - Mon 13 Aug 2018

Well it’s going to be quite fascinating when he finally finds out that she’s not, in fact, a fox demon. Also, I’m definitely curious about Tsubaki and Kouga‘s involvement and how Kagome’s ‘special ability’ will come into play (also, what exactly it’ll be).


SammyJams (Chapter 7) - Sat 11 Aug 2018

I really enjoyed their first interaction together!


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 6) - Thu 09 Aug 2018

Here we go!!! I’m so ready for this!


Roseanna (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 Aug 2018

Again, a fantastic chapter 6, and I enjoyed chapter 5 as well.  I wasn't sure exactly how Kagome was going to encounter Sesshomaru, but by using her desire to help per her canon personality and this most rececent chapter makes complete sense.  While they haven't truly met yet, it's just starting, and I cannot wait to see what will happen in the next chapter that goes more in detail of a converstion between the two.

As for the other characters, I think Kikyo is jaded with her job.  Probably been doing it too long that she doesn't see the process as harmful anymore.  And Koga, well... he does his job but doesn't really think about the why's of the process.  Now you introduce Inuyasha, and I could so see him in that position, not caring and just getting by with minimal effort to do his job.  His attitude is so spot-on that it's crazy.  And I loved the lecherousness that you added to his personality when he talks to Kikyo -- ring her "bell" and all. LOL!  Hillarious.

Please update soon, for I am highly enjoying this story and I cannot wait to see where it goes from here. :)


Cheyanna (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 Aug 2018

Inuyasha as a nurse was hilarious. Him and his pervert mind lol, I can’t wait to read more!!! Finally at last he sees the light! Kagome‘s got her work cut out for her. Thanks for the update!!;) 


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 5) - Tue 31 Jul 2018

kagome! Love the personality descriptions you’re giving us to show how each of our beloved characters would act in this world/story. It has a hint of their original selves but so much more. I can’t wait to see what happens when Kagome and Sesshomaru meet and what she may be able to even do for him, if anything.


Cheyanna (Chapter 5) - Sun 29 Jul 2018

Thanks for the update!!! Cant wait to read more;) 


Koree (Chapter 5) - Sun 29 Jul 2018

Eagerly waiting for Kagome to meet Sesshoumaru!! 


Tisha (Chapter 1) - Sat 28 Jul 2018

Love the story. It is well penned and tKes a look at how behavioral health was done before there was a standard. Sad part some places are still like this. The possession of Sesshomaru was awesome. It reminded me of No-Face from Spirited Away. The next chapter will be just as awesome as what you have delevered so far. Makes me wonder how our two favorite charactors will meet.


SmilingFool (Chapter 5) - Sat 28 Jul 2018

Sorry forgot Trinity also had good points on the sutra's and God's Palm....  It does make sense.  Hope to read more....    :P


SmilingFool (Chapter 5) - Sat 28 Jul 2018

I love the story, sad to see Sesshomaru in such a state however, I do love the idea of possession seeing how those can be award winning circumstances depending how you write it...  So far its been a blast.  I do hope Tsubaki gets purified or jyaki-fried never cared for that one....  Anyways, update soon.


VS (Chapter 5) - Sat 28 Jul 2018

Hello,

this was again a really emotional chapter! The part with Shippo made me cry!!! I feel so sorry for him! :'( Hopefully Kagome can help him!!! I have the feeling that in Youkai Manor nobody really tries to help! Neither Shippo nor Sesshoumaru have been asked some questions about themselves, so that they could find the root of the problem and start to help!!!

Thinks have to change drastically. And I'm sure Kagome will start with the changes. You mentioned already the effect of her powers on youkai. She has to find a way now, to understand them better and the way they are working, so that she can help the patients even more!

I love that you do researches for your story and explain them in your AN. Your story has been really interesting and well written so far.

And I'm definitely looking forward to your next update!

 


Arc-an angel (Chapter 4) - Thu 26 Jul 2018

I’m really enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter. I admit that I hate the treatment of Sesshomaru (or anyone in his position who is supposed to be cared for) but I like your use of supporting characters with this unique story plot. Till next chapter!


trinity3000 (Chapter 4) - Wed 25 Jul 2018

I like your story so far it is very original compared to a lot of other stories that I have read, but I have 2 questions after reading this chapter.  I probably just missed something when I read it, but I am a little confused so I am going to ask.

1.  You explained in detail that the sutras on his door were only lasting a small fraction of the time that they normally would.  I think you even said that some only lasted an hour or so.  When the Gods Palm was being used, it was described as pulling power from nearby sutras.  If the sutras were already wearing out so fast, wouldn't the Gods Palm use them up even faster?  How can they still be working?

2.  Also you stated that the Gods Palm pulls power from any other holy person around.  Wouldn't they feel the pull and come running, assuming that something really bad must have happened for someone to use that technique?


Cheyanna (Chapter 4) - Sat 21 Jul 2018

I really enjoy this story!!!!! I look forward to your next update!! This is actually a well thought out story and I am honored you decided to share it!! Thanks for the update!;) I bet Tsubaki is going to be regretting this session soon enough. 


Roseanna (Chapter 4) - Sat 21 Jul 2018

I found this story when you posted the first chapter.  I was intrigued with both the synopsis as well as the intrigue of Chapter 1.  Then Chapter 2 came along, and trying to figure out exactly what was going on... a lot of questions in my mind.  Chapter 4 provides more clarity, but omg... Tsubaki is evil!  I sure hope that when Kagome is introduced, she is cannon as you have the rest of the characters so far, and that she actually HELPS Sesshomaru with his affliction.  I look forward to future updates, and please do so soon with the great writing you have presented us readers with! :)


Neelixonee (Chapter 3) - Mon 16 Jul 2018

Loooove this kind of story supplement.  I've read a number of books where suplementarry images, forms, etc are added to the story, and it always helps brings more realism to the fiction.  Very cool.


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Mon 16 Jul 2018

Neat! Looking forward to the next chapter! I wonder when Kagome will be introduced. Feel bad for Rin though!


Christine (Chapter 2) - Sat 14 Jul 2018

Wonderful job!  Fun to read! 


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