As others have pointed out, this seems to be based off of Goblin, do I would recommend putting a disclaimer in your story. Otherwise, this seems like a good start! I'm looking forward to reading more.
A most interesting and exciting story...loving it.
It is very well written, although, there are a few grammatical errors. No worries, they did nothing to upset the flow of the story.
I like what I am reading so far and I hope you continue writing this fiction.
So looking forward to finding out the backstory of the 'what and why' to Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's predicaments.
Welcome to Dokuga and great job of writing!!!
Cheers!!!