Reviews for The Claim by Myella

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Niecy (Chapter 6) - Sat 16 Jun 2018

You are very good. Your story has me excited for more. Please keep up the good work. Until next  time. We'll be waiting


Loveyaa (Chapter 6) - Thu 14 Jun 2018

Nothing like trying to protect someone by saying how special they are and making everybody want them. Quite an interesting story you got here. I'm still hesitant with Sesshoumaru since he doesn't have pure intentions either. I can't wait to see what happens next though and where everybody takes things from here :)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Thu 14 Jun 2018

This chapter was sweet, please update the next chapter quickly!


SammyJams (Chapter 6) - Thu 14 Jun 2018

What a sweet chapter!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Thu 14 Jun 2018

Fantastic story so far. I am loving the way it is written and the pace is nice also.

I have no doubt that Sesshomaru will be Kagome's mate in the end.  Neither will have no other than each other.

Looking forward to the future updates.

Very well written...love your style...only wish the chapters were longer but I will take what you have to offer. :)

Cheers!!!


Koritsia (Chapter 5) - Wed 13 Jun 2018

I Love it! Please keep working on this story, it is so interesting.


Mkd94 (Chapter 5) - Tue 12 Jun 2018

Awesom story!! Can’t wait for the next chapte!!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Sun 10 Jun 2018

Nice chapter, please update the next chapter quickly!


Nilee1 (Chapter 5) - Sun 10 Jun 2018

Great chapter, I am eager for the next. We’re waiting ????


SammyJams (Chapter 5) - Sun 10 Jun 2018

As always, another exciting update! Can’t wait for more!


Crimson Rose (Chapter 5) - Sun 10 Jun 2018

yesssss! I loved this chapter and all the info you added into it. I can’t wait for the next and I’m super excited to see where you’ll take us with this story.


Jennn (Chapter 5) - Sun 10 Jun 2018

I think you can keep the story going and maybe explain her past in future chapters with flashbacks? I don’t necessarily believe that you need to rewrite the beginning of YOUR story. 


Crimson Rose (Chapter 5) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

I don’t think you need to address her past in prior chapters. It’s good if the next few chapters will have pieces to put everything together. I really look forward to the next chapter to see what happens to Kagome!


candy (Chapter 5) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

Please update soon this is so good


Lauren (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

This is a good outline and after a revision could be a great story, but the first chapter doesn't read as the beginning. It reads more like the fifth or eighth chapter of a book. Especially as you gloss over the details of Shippou's growth and Kagome's travl back to Edo (from where, we don't know). It's off-putting. 


Jennn (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

I keep rereading this story it’s so good. I hope you update soon!! I cannot wait to read more


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

Great story, please update the next chapter quickly!


Koree (Chapter 4) - Fri 08 Jun 2018

Great story 


Jennn (Chapter 4) - Fri 08 Jun 2018

Holy moly. This story is awesome!!! Please update soon! 


Alesia (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Jun 2018

Interesting keep going


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