farie_insignias (Chapter 2) - Tue 02 Oct 2018

I'm very curious to see how you'll retell this story. I really like you're writing style. Looking forward to the next chapter!


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Wed 20 Jun 2018

A sweet retelling of Cinderella. Looking forward to more. 


Aimee Simmons (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Jun 2018

oh my goodness...  Please continue this story.

I absolutely adore it so far.

 


Loveyaa (Chapter 2) - Mon 11 Jun 2018

Hmm...an interesting start. I can't wait to see where you take it and how you put your own spin on it. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


princess of the western lands (Chapter 2) - Tue 29 May 2018

Great story and we'll written too. I love how you're adding in all of the characters, while giving them their own stories. I like the unique feel of your story as well. Even though the story base is a much told and loved one, you've been able to give it a different spin. I never would have thought to put kagura as her stepmother. I also like your attention to detail and how you made sure to take into account the cultural differences. I like that you kept the IY world, not just humans.

 

Now for my questions. Will Naraku been in this? Will midoriko be the fairy godmother? Does Kagome have a secret interest in attending the festival?

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 2) - Mon 28 May 2018

Will she dare to attend the ball? Or before that date comes will she and Sesshoumaru had a chance to meet? Thank you for the update! 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Sun 27 May 2018

Excellent chapter and very nicely written...keep up the good work.

I wonder why Kagome is so afraid of her pretend mother and pretend sister.  She needs to grow up and grow a pair, then maybe she can stand up to those two women and regain her self-esteem and freedom instead of just letting them walk all over her like a door mat.

Anyway, love the story...hope to see another update soon.

Cheers!!!


Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 1) - Fri 25 May 2018

Cinderella story was one of my favorite tale next to Beauty and the Beast, I'm so glad that there's someone like you out there, to write our favorite couple in this fashion, because I believe there wasn't enough Sesskag story written in Cinderella style, and this is my first time and the first one I have ever encountered.

Thus,  I am eager for  the next update  and Good Luck!


Lowlife Acrobat (Chapter 1) - Thu 24 May 2018

So far I like your combination of the classic Cinderella story and Inuyasha. I like it a lot. Especially, Kikyo being Kagome's stepsister. Let's see if you'll make it so Kagome will lose her slipper or shoe similarly to Cinderella losing her glass slipper, or will you come up will something completely different? Maybe Kagome will lose the Sacred Jewel? 

 

I can't wait to see what you come up with. (^^)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Wed 23 May 2018

Ah, I think this is going to be an interesting, enchanting and slightly Inuyashsque tale of Cinderella. That was always one of my favorite fairytale stories.

This first chapter is written very nicely, however, there are a few grammar and punctuation errors but they did not disturb the flow of the story.

I like the clever choice of Kagura being Kagome's step-mother.  Having her and Kikyo as a step-sister has got to be very taxing and exhaustive on Kagome...poor little 'cricket'.  :(

I am guessing that maybe Kaede is going to be in the role of fairy godmother perhaps?  :)

Looking forward to more chapters soon and thank you for sharing.

Excellent job!!!

Welcome to Dokuga!


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