I'll tell you what i think... you better hurry your happy graduating butt up and post the next chapter!!!!!!!!
I just love this story. I always look forward to the next chapter.
OMG i absolutely positively love your story...ohh the story line i am loving with a capital L..please put up the couple of chapter[[s]] soon i cant wait
sunset in love (Chapter 2) - Fri 24 Oct 2008
it's getting good, but somehow i long to see sesshoumaru being rejected for being such an asshole, you know, perhaps if Kag marry Bankinstead, of perhaps if the girls would lobby for Bank instead of ushing Kag and Sessh together, btw, Sessh is married to miyu right...
i love this story and i love that Kags is on point abotu everything, i can't wait for your next update its such a wonderful story!
Ack! Well, this sure looks to be an interesting ride, I can't hardly wait for the next chapter.
I just love this story as is. You kept the hair and eye coloring of some of the youkai which probably would have made a little more sense to their heritage. I am waiting anxiously for the next chapters.
Great story writing and it's starting to heat up. Keep it going *hugs and smiles*
craps i coulnt review twice on chapter 2, from ff so i'm here to tell you YOUR EVIL!!!!! why o why the cliffy? do you hate us so much? Anyway i really loved this second chapter, I really dont want kags to be all head over heels for Sess, swoon inwardly sure but does make her all gahgah over this man, he was an ass hole, and didnt even give her a chance to explain anything, not to mention, he took someone elses word over hers when they'd been together for 2 years? No i dont think Kags should be all gahgah over him. Besides she is as you said THE Kagome Higurashi, Fashionesta, Glamazon, Wanton Sex Kitton to the American markets, one Sesshomaru Taishou, asshole millionaire should not be able to unsettle her, besides She's the one that knows the truth, has the kids, the career, the money too, She's the happy one. It would always be great if there was no 'father' on the girls birth certificate, that way he had no legal recoarse either. o and if he wants visitation rights or something i think our kags should tell him he can come over their house but his bitch of a wife will stay away from Kag's daughters. i love this story and i cannot wait for the next update! - r0o
slayer0427 (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Oct 2008
I have to say Maginific!!!! I just love the way each character is well played out. Although I'm kinda anxious to see Sessho's reaction when Kags tells him about the twins!!!!! Please update soon!!! ^_^
T.T did someone make you mad? is that why you left us with a cliffy? I really like your fic so just hit them and get it over with, smile, and continue that chapter!~ =P hehe
ami (Chapter 1) - Sun 19 Oct 2008
i like more please
I kind of like the idea of him having teenage children that he doesn't know about all of a sudden barging into his well ordered life turning it upside down. There's only one thing I'm disappointed about, though. There are no youkai. When you change youkai into humans for a story, they seem to loose some of their personality and become bland. No way can I picture Sesshoumaru as nothing except as a youkai. His daughters would have made cute hanyous. Sorry, but that's my preference.
I like the youkai idea can they theybe kitsuns? I do think ill love this story thought
I love your story!!! cna't wait for the next update......
By the way about your Questions... I think you should make them Demon and Hanyou ect.. But not everyone... and remember to make Kagome a MIko!
sesshy koi (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Oct 2008
yea i agree..i think there should be hanyou n youkais becuz i can't picture sesshomaru as anything else but as a youkai..as u no sesshomaru hates humans but yet u made him into one..
Caught_by_silver (Chapter 1) - Sun 19 Oct 2008
i would love to read more and i agree with sugar0o. but there is faulty planing with the youkai thing...if sesshoumaru was the all powerful youkai he always is...wouldnt he be able to smell if she was doing someone else or smell out her lies
Jill Dozer (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Oct 2008
I think that the story is great As Is, I don't think that there is any real reason to change even a part of it.
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