Very interesting start to your first fascinating story. I hope the chapters will be longer from here on out...please, pretty please!!! :)
It does have a few spelling and grammatical errors but, in my opinion, they do not interrupt the flow of the story. It is nicely written.
Will you be adding flashbacks showing how Sesshomaru and Kagome came to be mated?
I also hope that it won't be too long of a wait before they are reunited and I take it that Akihiko is full demon?
I bet Sesshomaru will be both surprised and annoyed of having missed his firstborn and heir's birth.
I am looking forward to future updates and hopefully they will not be too long of a wait in posting but RL happens and we will just have to exercise patience. :) lol
Well done and welcome to the Dokuga community. Thank you for sharing your story.
Cheers!!!
You have my ear. Keep going.????????????
Too short but very interesting story!
your 1st chapter of your 1st story, a little bit short but not bad. Maybe you should get a beta to fix all the grammatical errors.
It's cool that SessKag's first born has both their eyes. i'd glad to read more, so pls carry on
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