I really love the beginning, I really do but.... Is so short and spare between that I'm afraid that you would not be finishing the story. Hope I'm wrong.
I wonder what got into them during that time? Now is she has any plan to give back that diamond ring to sess? So eager for more!
Started good with an actual chapter, but it’s shrank now to snippets. Not interested in reading a paragraph or two so I’ll be stopping here.
Love it! The great Sesshoumaru getting marriage by Elvis. What will his family say? I wonder when Kagome was suppose to get married and to whom. Thankfully, it was not Inuyasha.
This is the most fun I had reading in a while. I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I love this story already hahaha. I have a hunch that the group of guys was inuyasha and the squad hahahahaha. Cant wait to read more ????
Thank you for continuing this story.!
Heh heh heh...I can't wait to see how the sh_t hits the fan! Does anyone else know? I'm also curious about the identity of Kagome's intended groom. Thanks for continuing the story!
the story is o uch fun cant Wai for more chapters
i read this a while back and forgot to leave a review. this was a great one shot. i was at a loss when it ended b/c i thought there could be more to it. i'm glad you decided to come back and add more to the story. i think it has potiental to be a great collection of one shots. if you keep writing i'll keep reading. i hope it has a good ending with babies at the end of the story. i don't mind angst, but not too much. c'ya'
For a fan fiction written simply for "fun and games," this is amazing. It has a passive descriptive style that's easy on the eyes but carries itself just fine. However, I have to admit I found myself having to reread some sentences to understand what was happening, like in one sentence a lot was happening so I got lost, but seeing how in the future your chapters will be 100 to 500 words long that most likely won't happen again.
I am looking forward to how Kagome and Sesshomaru will move forward from here like you wake up with a complete stranger and you realize your married to them? Now that's a storyline truly dying to be explored.
Ooh I really hope that "Complete" isn't real. Please say there's more? I have always loved this type of prompt for these two because it just seems so OOC but so interesting to see what their reactions would be and this was an amazing start to what could be an amazing chapter story so I really hope you have more for us!
Casino!! Love it will love it more when I read more.
Please please pleaseee, keep going, don't let us like this!!! I really like the story and I would love to read more.
This story looks awesome!!
please please continue this is a hoot
I love the story...using a few characters and the 'White Dog' casino from your other fic 'Death'...nice idea. :)
But you are going to continue it, right?...right? :/
You cannot just leave us swinging in the wind like this. I forbid it. :(
LOL!!!
Heres hoping for a continuation.
Great writing job.
Cheers!!!
Damn! This deserve a continuation! Pls Have Mercy! Don't leave us hanging! I badly wanted to know that after sesshomaru find out he's a bachelor no more and ridiculously woke up that morning just to find out he have been slept with kagome and a someone else's bride to be, tho that's a real SHIT and plus it seems like they've got married too sort of a thing, But hey would he dare find her there for help each other find out what happened that night.
So please continue this I'm begging you!!!!
Why!!!!!! Why would you do this to meeee!!!! Waaaaahhhhhhh!!!! ????
No! I NEED to know what happens next. Please continue it!!!
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