i read this a while back and forgot to leave a review. this was a great one shot. i was at a loss when it ended b/c i thought there could be more to it. i'm glad you decided to come back and add more to the story. i think it has potiental to be a great collection of one shots. if you keep writing i'll keep reading. i hope it has a good ending with babies at the end of the story. i don't mind angst, but not too much. c'ya'
For a fan fiction written simply for "fun and games," this is amazing. It has a passive descriptive style that's easy on the eyes but carries itself just fine. However, I have to admit I found myself having to reread some sentences to understand what was happening, like in one sentence a lot was happening so I got lost, but seeing how in the future your chapters will be 100 to 500 words long that most likely won't happen again.
I am looking forward to how Kagome and Sesshomaru will move forward from here like you wake up with a complete stranger and you realize your married to them? Now that's a storyline truly dying to be explored.
Chizk (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Jun 2018
Ooh I really hope that "Complete" isn't real. Please say there's more? I have always loved this type of prompt for these two because it just seems so OOC but so interesting to see what their reactions would be and this was an amazing start to what could be an amazing chapter story so I really hope you have more for us!
Casino!! Love it will love it more when I read more.
I would like to see more please
Miko (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 May 2018
Please please pleaseee, keep going, don't let us like this!!! I really like the story and I would love to read more.
Toni (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 May 2018
This story looks awesome!!
Toni (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 May 2018
please please continue this is a hoot
I love the story...using a few characters and the 'White Dog' casino from your other fic 'Death'...nice idea. :)
But you are going to continue it, right?...right? :/
You cannot just leave us swinging in the wind like this. I forbid it. :(
LOL!!!
Heres hoping for a continuation.
Great writing job.
Cheers!!!
Damn! This deserve a continuation! Pls Have Mercy! Don't leave us hanging! I badly wanted to know that after sesshomaru find out he's a bachelor no more and ridiculously woke up that morning just to find out he have been slept with kagome and a someone else's bride to be, tho that's a real SHIT and plus it seems like they've got married too sort of a thing, But hey would he dare find her there for help each other find out what happened that night.
So please continue this I'm begging you!!!!
Why!!!!!! Why would you do this to meeee!!!! Waaaaahhhhhhh!!!! ????
No! I NEED to know what happens next. Please continue it!!!
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