Reviews for The Water Dog by Miss Elinor

VS (Chapter 3) - Sat 12 May 2018

Hello,

I have to say your writing style is lovely!!! I cannot explain why exactly, maybe it's the way you describe things, or the way you are able to continue the story without answering questions, instead you are opening more and more questions and the further you go the more interesting it gets...does that make sense?

Anyway it should be a compliment!!!

I like the way you always come back to the colours brown, green and blue, they connect your chapters! And I adore Shippo, so I'm happy to see that you include this mischievous bundle of joy in your story!!!

Your last chapter had me really smiling - it must be indeed very difficult to hide a kitsune, no matter where you are ;D

Though your last chapter was extremely short, are you going to do drabbles now?

 

I look forward to your next update!


Tessitura (Chapter 2) - Wed 09 May 2018

such a lovely begining.  although now she is picking up kitsune trouble. :)


Marie (Chapter 2) - Wed 09 May 2018

I am totally enjoying your story brief so far but allot of info and details. Please update soon


Ryo chan (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Apr 2018

Beautiful, very descriptive and catching can't wait for the rest ????


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Apr 2018

I am intrigued...nicely written first chapter.

Looking forward to next chapter.

Thanks for sharing.

Cheers!!!


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