Reviews for Erotes' Touch by DelphinieN

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blommie8 (Chapter 18) - Fri 16 Nov 2018

Ree-san (Chapter 18) - Wed 14 Nov 2018

I'm not really sure about these types of chapters. Nothing moves forward. Feels like momentum is lost. 


Axellynne Mori (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Nov 2018

Loving this story thus far, I just got back into fanfiction again. So happy to stumble upon this little gem. Please update soon love, I love it! 


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 18) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

So I have noticed something in the story. You use the word escalator to describe the elevator. Is there a reason for that? Other then that everything is well written. 


candy (Chapter 18) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

Poor Sesshomaru so sick thank goodness Kagome can help him. It sucks to see the other woman I feel her pain. Can't wait for another update soon.


Nais (Chapter 17) - Sun 07 Oct 2018

Hi ! I really enjoy this story... I hope to have the pleasure to discover more of it soon ^^ I always love reading stories in which Sesshoumaru has to deal with feelings he doesn’t want to acknowledge... And you discribe this side of him with talent ! Thanks you for this excellent work !


Blommie8 (Chapter 17) - Sun 07 Oct 2018

VS (Chapter 17) - Wed 12 Sep 2018

Hello,

you made me really laugh with this chapter! It was soo funny seeing Kagome and Inuyasha so worried. He is afraid that she will find out about the affair and she too is afraid that he is going to find out! And I was sittig here and was wishing like a sick devil, that either Rin or Sesshoumaru walk into Inuyasha's office and the real drama begin!!! :D

Though when Inuyasha finally finds out Kagome can say "we are only meeting for sex once a week". After all he is proud of himself that he reduced his affair with Rin to once a week .... ts...asshole!

Kagome is coming slowly to a decision about her relationship with Inuyasha and I'm really curious to see where you will be going with this story!

I'm looking forward to your next update!


VS (Chapter 13) - Wed 12 Sep 2018

Hello,

this was a wonderful chapter! You described Sesshoumaru's confusion and self doubts perfectly!!! I mean I was asking myself the question too, if he only imagined things, because your description was so realistic!!! Well done!


Melissa (Chapter 17) - Wed 29 Aug 2018

I like your story. Hope to see more of it soon.


Kino (Chapter 17) - Tue 28 Aug 2018

Am I the only one secretly hoping Rin walks in now that Inuyasha is trying to get Kagome to stop for lunch, for getting it's his day he meets up with her and she comes right into the room and drops the ball? It would be a priceless moment! Especially if Kagome gets to tell him she's known for some time!


Mysheeki (Chapter 15) - Tue 07 Aug 2018

Oooooohhhhhhh. This is a great fic. Please keep it up!


Shayla (Chapter 15) - Tue 31 Jul 2018

Interesting writing plz continue


Niomi (Chapter 14) - Tue 10 Jul 2018

Thank you for putting in so much effort to create this long chapter. I check just about every other day to see if you’ve update! yes there are many stories here but only a few great writers. I am obsessed with how this relationship is progressing. My heart is already aching for a happy ending for them. I just know you’re not gonna give it easy! what an emotional roller coaster this chapter, happy, sad, excitement, anxiousness. looking forwar to more!


van (Chapter 14) - Mon 09 Jul 2018

oooh! an update!!!!! thank you! 

i'm sitting obediently, waiting for the painful part of this story :*

*evil laugh*


Jane (Chapter 12) - Wed 13 Jun 2018

Sterility means being unable to reproduce

And fertility means being highly likely to reproduce another word for this is virile

English is a hard language with subthe changes to words that changes the meaning.

I was unsure if you meant to use sterile in this chapter.

I love your work and English is in fact the hardest to learn so you have my applause regardless 


LadyNita (Chapter 11) - Tue 12 Jun 2018

I cant get enough of this story


Niomi (Chapter 11) - Sat 02 Jun 2018

Ok I totally get what you’re doing and I don’t blame you! I don’t ever want the story to end anywayy. I don’t think it’s about morals and values in fiction, sometimes these things happen in real life and it’s what people deal with. thanks for the quick update, it was a real treat. I love seeing her relationship with Sess progress! It is so well written, it’s like a scene playing out in my mind. I can feel the connection! I can’t wait to see what happens next. Thank you x


Niomi (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 Jun 2018

Despite what you think, your writing is amazing. They all are very true to character, I love the connection, the emotions, everything! I look forward to more Sess & Kah development. Their connection is envious. I like how is isn’t in denial of their connection. Inuyasha really does going through the emotional roller coaster of a cheater. Great work! excited for more! 


Saraf Anjum (Chapter 10) - Wed 23 May 2018

Your writing style is wonderful, dear. Don't know if it's just bad time but recently all I can find are badly written; barely there storyline, fanfictions. So finding and reading your story is like much needed fresh air. Thank you for taking time out of your days to write this story. 

The plot is very common. But we love this genre as much as you, coz we are all hopeless fans of Sesshomaru x Kagome (~???)~ Looking forward to the next installment dear.

P.S. Will my emoji come out right?


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