Reviews for Erotes' Touch by DelphinieN

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CK (Chapter 20) - Wed 09 Jan 2019

I love this. Your writing is amazing. Please update as soon as you can. 


CK (Chapter 20) - Wed 09 Jan 2019

I love this. Your writing is amazing. Please update as soon as you can. 


R (Chapter 20) - Wed 09 Jan 2019

Aw, these two are killing me softly with their sad, unspoken (mutual) tenderness. Poor Sesshoumaru - he’s so cracked open in this chapter. You did an awesome job of portraying the unraveling of his insides for Kagome. On the other hand, it’s painful to see Kagome tighten her own noose in this double life. It was refreshing to see her work herself up into some anxious courage, but I’m also hoping she can find a way out of her self-justification loop. Her acting out is the same as Inuyasha’s, neither able to really talk in a mature way about the real failures in their relationship. Heartbreaking...for everyone! Amazing writing. You’ve really captured their torment in a way that the reader can easily empathize with. Thanks for the great chapter!


blommie8 (Chapter 20) - Wed 09 Jan 2019
kagome!!! you must broke with inucheater asap!!! why did you keep that unhealty relationship? even you and sesshy kun not together at the end..at least be a though girl for once. life is not all about boyfriend.... if i were you...i'll dump him on the trash with his misstress.and find my own happines...why do i have to endure my self all about that cheating thing....it's wasting!!

maria (Chapter 20) - Tue 08 Jan 2019

I love thisss


Niomi (Chapter 20) - Tue 08 Jan 2019

Wow, you never disappoint! The detail, the image, the feels. You are amazing! What a real story unfolding. Always looking forward to your updates. Thank you so much!


jk (Chapter 20) - Mon 07 Jan 2019

Ok so Kagome is not going to be able to do anything. I think its time sesshomaru takes matters into his hand and finds about inuyasha cheating and then kekekeke.

 

Please tell me something like this is going to happen soon i would love to see how sesshomaru tortures inuyasha. ;D

 

Ps. Love the story .XOXO


Bruna (Chapter 1) - Fri 21 Dec 2018

Your writing is amazing, loving your story! Please, keep up <3


Miranda (Chapter 19) - Tue 11 Dec 2018

This story is soooo good! I come every so often just to see if you updated. Keep up the great work <33 


Blommie8 (Chapter 19) - Tue 11 Dec 2018

R (Chapter 19) - Mon 10 Dec 2018

Ah, the struggle to keep from falling is real... Their little dance is a few beautifully complicated moments from a wicked spiral. Can’t wait to see how Sesshoumaru‘s sickness and their time together shifts the tenuous connection! Lovely writing ~ thank you for the update!


blommie8 (Chapter 18) - Fri 16 Nov 2018

Ree-san (Chapter 18) - Wed 14 Nov 2018

I'm not really sure about these types of chapters. Nothing moves forward. Feels like momentum is lost. 


Axellynne Mori (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Nov 2018

Loving this story thus far, I just got back into fanfiction again. So happy to stumble upon this little gem. Please update soon love, I love it! 


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 18) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

So I have noticed something in the story. You use the word escalator to describe the elevator. Is there a reason for that? Other then that everything is well written. 


candy (Chapter 18) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

Poor Sesshomaru so sick thank goodness Kagome can help him. It sucks to see the other woman I feel her pain. Can't wait for another update soon.


Nais (Chapter 17) - Sun 07 Oct 2018

Hi ! I really enjoy this story... I hope to have the pleasure to discover more of it soon ^^ I always love reading stories in which Sesshoumaru has to deal with feelings he doesn’t want to acknowledge... And you discribe this side of him with talent ! Thanks you for this excellent work !


Blommie8 (Chapter 17) - Sun 07 Oct 2018

VS (Chapter 17) - Wed 12 Sep 2018

Hello,

you made me really laugh with this chapter! It was soo funny seeing Kagome and Inuyasha so worried. He is afraid that she will find out about the affair and she too is afraid that he is going to find out! And I was sittig here and was wishing like a sick devil, that either Rin or Sesshoumaru walk into Inuyasha's office and the real drama begin!!! :D

Though when Inuyasha finally finds out Kagome can say "we are only meeting for sex once a week". After all he is proud of himself that he reduced his affair with Rin to once a week .... ts...asshole!

Kagome is coming slowly to a decision about her relationship with Inuyasha and I'm really curious to see where you will be going with this story!

I'm looking forward to your next update!


VS (Chapter 13) - Wed 12 Sep 2018

Hello,

this was a wonderful chapter! You described Sesshoumaru's confusion and self doubts perfectly!!! I mean I was asking myself the question too, if he only imagined things, because your description was so realistic!!! Well done!


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