HI, LOVE THE PLOT SO FAR ...LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING WHERE THE STORY GOES...I HOPE KAGS GETS SOME WAY TO EXTEND HER LIFE TO THAT OF HER MATE...SO SHE DOESN'T LOOSE HER FAMILY.... AND I HOPE SHE FINDS A WAY TO GIVE SESS FULL BLOOD INU PUPS THAT SHE AND HE HAVE TOGETHER.... I HOPE THEY HAVE A LARGE FAMILY.... AT LEAST 10 PUPS . IS KAGS GOING TO TRAVEL A WHILE TO OTHER MIKO VILLAGES TO INCREASE HER POWER AND LEARN MORE MIKO POWERS LIKE , ( SPELLS, ENCHANTMENTS, HOW TO MAKE OFUDA AND SUTRA, BARRIERS , MAKE WEAPONS WITH HER REIKI , MAKE KOTADOMA NECKLACES LIKE INUYASHA WORE , PERFORM EXORCISMS, HEALING DEMONS AND HUMANS , MAKE POTIONS AND POISONS, THROW POWER BALLS AND SHOOT LIGHTNING FROM HER HANDS LIKE KIKYO DID ONCE , MAKE TREES AND PLANTS GROW BY PLACING HER HANDS ON GROUND AND MAKE ALL PLANTS GROW LIKE KIKYO DID IN SERIES.I ALWAYS THOUGHT KAGOME LOOKED MUCH MORE LIKE MIDORIKO... THAN SHE EVER DID KIKYO.. AND DURING THE SERIES SEVERAL OTHER PEOPLE SAID THE SAME...LIKE KAEDE,MIROKU,MIOGA, SANGO,AND TOTASAI. BUT ALSO MIROKU ALSO SAID KAGOMES POWER WAS MORE LIKE MIDORIKO'S THAN KIKYO'S.... MIOGA AND KAEDE SAID SOMETHING ONCE ABOUT KAGOME'S POWER BEING CLOSER TO MIDOTIKO'S LEVEL THAN KIKYO'S BUT WITHOUT THE TRAINING AND KNOWLEDGE OF HOW TO TRAIN ALL THAT POWER . THAT SHE WOULD NEED TO TRAIN TO REACH HER POTENTIAL .
i love this! The descriptions used to show Kagome’s growth are wonderful and I’m so glad Inuyasha isn’t being mean and irrational about everything!!! I can’t wait for the next one!
Thank you for the shout out. This chapter is very good and well written. I can also tell the difference between who's talking and it's not one big paragraph. I like how you've pushed forward but didn't rush it either. You gave inuyasha and kagome their moment but it still moved on, with sesshomaru put in but not too soon. Wonder what inuyasha's going to say when he smells his brother in the village. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
Wow its been a while since ive come across a new story on here that captured my interest so quickly! i cant wait to see how kagome grows as a person and what changes will be wrought on her journey! and poor sesshomaru! he just cant help that inu curiousity! haha! I'm looking forward to the next update! :)
Seems like Sesshoumaru gas taken interest though. However, with Kagome being out of the village. Who knows when their paths will cross again. I cannot wait to see what she gets herself into next. She us bound to attract some attention. Thanks for the update.
I like this concept, especially with a powerful Kagome. She needs someone just as powerful. I wonder how everyone will react to her decision.Update soon.
This is a good start for a first chapter. I saw a few grammatical errors but other than that it was well written. I like that you told what happend between inuyasha and kagome quickly but with plenty of detail. You were very clear on what happend leaving no "what if's" in the story. I also like how your pushing the story forward from what we know and moving on with kagome's journey. Plus i like how you made her 'practically' prepare for living in the feudal era. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
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