Interesting. This would be a good origal story.

I loved this. Seriously. Good work :)

I honestly really enjoyed this so much. Love the back story between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. She is literally me if I were a character. I also feel a Hela vibe as well which I am totally digging. I really enjoyed Sesshoumaru as well and honestly didn't feel him too OOC - he always had a soft spot for Rin. It is still nice to see Kagome and Sesshoumaru back together and you can feel the chemistry between the two. I am honestly surprised this is a one shot because I see some awesome potential as a one shot fic and its so unique. I haven't really seen or a story like this or if I have its been YEARS. Excellent job! Can't wait to see more of what you come up with and who knows, maybe you'll continue this one? Take care!

Awesome first chapter.. is this set in another reality where Kagome is an elemental demon instead of human ? 

sorryits  on shot