Read the first version. I like both but this one is good because it's allowed time to move forward. I like that they're not still in the feudal era.
I'm looking forward to this story and how things are going go. Will there be some background information on how sesshomaru came to care so much for kagome. How did kagome know things had changed between and Inuyasha so much that she knew he came to kill her?
Despite the ocassional spelling error, I really like this story and I read the other version first and I actually liked that one too.
I hope you will incorporate some of those action scenes into this version.
Interesting plot idea...sounds like a fun read...loving the story so far.
Nice writing...great job!!!
So looking forward to reading more updates very soon.
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