I'm loving this story!

Hi, thank you for the stories.

Gotta say, i prefer your single paragraph than that chunky paragraph :)

This was some good information about her getting around and meeting others. Why did you go with this very choppy way of writing? Reading one sentence at a time makes the story jumpy instead of letting it flow. You could blend the areas that are similar together. The scene at breakfast, the one with Kaede and then the one in the kitchen. They can be discriptive help the story flow. Writing is hard work. I’m sure you will find your way the more you write. Good job. 

Very nice update. i like how you did the dream with the tree and her father. 

Kagome left???to go where? She doesn’t know her way around. Finish the thought.Have Sessh or a servant guide her to the garden. She has a whole new world to explore. How exciting for her. Nice update. Thanks. 

This is moving along fair well. Just a few things. The last chapter has Sessh catching her, then we find her in the hot spring with no explanation how she got there. You could have added a few lines from Kagomes POV of how she got away. Also, hot springs don’t cool. They are kept warm constantly, usually by volcanically supplied steam sources. You are doing well. Don’t rush the story. It’s a journey. Good luck. 

Hmmm...this has promise. A twist on an old favorite. 

did you post chapter 7 and then remove it? i have an alert for it... i'm confused lol

A little hard to follow at end there. 

I read it twice.  So good. No lip kissing yet. Does that have to do with the mating? Thanks for the update.

Kagome is already making friends.

Hm. The Tree of Ages.

All seems well.

Oh wow. Such stubborn hatred.

Oh very interest beginning!

Great story so far. Will Kagome realize that it wasn't a dream? I wonder what her mothers punishment will be. Kikyou seems to have been tricked by her mother into believing she's the heir but then again she also blamed Kagome for the death of father.

Update soon onegai

Ja ne

Very interesting story.  I'm excited to see how the story flows.  Just favorited your work.

Can't wait for the next chapters.

Can’t wait for more!