Reviews for Fennel by CookieAsylum

KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

That’s was a terrific chapter. I appreciate the background history too. Hmmm, this guy is saving your skin girly, a little gratitude. LOL! Thanks so much for updating. Cheers!


Jaken (Chapter 5) - Fri 13 Apr 2018

Story have some similarities to anime movie 'Sword of Stranger'..  especially the hair dye part  


Natalia (Chapter 5) - Fri 13 Apr 2018

Kagome is sometimes naive. She is being hunted but she wants to go around inns! I am glad he is more logical.

And kikyo has a plan. Was inuyasha her love that died?

HM many questions...

Interesting!

I very much enjoyed the chapter. Thx for updating!


KShadeslady (Chapter 4) - Mon 02 Apr 2018

Great update! They are close on their tails! Will the old man betray them? Thanks also for the history lesson. Cheers!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Fri 30 Mar 2018

Very interesting chapter.

Most of the major characters are starting to make an entrance.  Only a few left to make an appearance.

We're missing all of the gang...Sango, Miroku, Shippo, Kaede, Kikyo, Inuyasha and Rin, maybe even Kirara in some form and even Jaken???

I can think of a few more like Koga, Ayame, Myouga and Totosai.  Will any of these guys be in the this story at some point? Maybe the captured miko is Kikyo...hmmm.

I would love to read how you will bring them in and what part they will...that is if you intend to write them in.  LoL  :)

Looking forward to future updates of this fascinating tale.

Well done!!!


Cheyanna (Chapter 4) - Tue 27 Mar 2018

No old man!!! I cant wait to read more!!!


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Sat 24 Mar 2018

Nice chapter. Love the throwback to the show with the Sakura design. He acts as though he recognizes that artifact. Nice update, Thanks!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Fri 23 Mar 2018

I have to keep reminding myself that Sesshomaru is not demon in this story...how is it that his eyes are gold?

His intense interest in the artifact that Kagome has in her possession seems to be a very important item that may have belonged to his clan. 

I wonder why she took that item with her?

I find it interesting in your liberal use of the time period and places.  Nicely done.

Looking forward to further updates.


Natalia (Chapter 3) - Fri 23 Mar 2018

Despite the fact that I don't like human inuyasha cast I find myself enjoying this. Literally can't wait for mimo. Thx for updating.


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Fri 23 Mar 2018

I can’t wait to read more!!! So much for Samurai honor lol. 


Cheyanna (Chapter 2) - Mon 19 Mar 2018

I can’t wait to read more!!!! I’m excited to read more!!!;) 


roberta. (Chapter 2) - Mon 19 Mar 2018

Very interesting looking forward to seeing more.


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Mar 2018

I missed the first chapter. Had to backtrack. This looks like like it will be wicked fun. Sometimes I just need some battle. I love the history bits also. You can indulge in that all you want. Thanks!


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Mon 19 Mar 2018

Oh this promises to be very interesting. Looking forward to more. Very nice beginning. 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Mon 19 Mar 2018

Very good second chapter...nicely played out battle scene.

I am wanting more and more. 

Update again soon or when you can.

Great job in writing and working with the historical knowledge you gleaned.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Mar 2018

It seems that I have come across another intriguing story...the summary piqued my interest.

This first chapter is very nicely written and well put together...it has engrossed my need to read another good story.  lol  :)

I am, of course, looking forward to the upcoming chapters to feed this need to read.  lol  :)

Just feeling a little silly from the lack of sleep...I suffer from insomnia.  :(

Thank you for sharing...

 

Cheers!!!


kaoruhana (Chapter 2) - Mon 19 Mar 2018

Yay!  Another historical story to read!  I'm dying to know more about how the Ronin and Kagome will continue their relationship and if he'll help her.

Can't wait to read more! 

KH


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