You might reread what you write I've noticed a few places were information is given then changed.

Example:

          At first you said that the boys looked to be between 4-6 but then you described them and keep using the word toddler which indicates that they are more likely around 2-3 years old. 

Another one is when she wakes up she thinks that it's so wonderful that shippo is understanding about the boys and you say they have been traveling for a few weeks rather then a week. You keep going back and forth on the time line. 

Other then those few areas it is very well read and I wonder what will happen when sesshomaru finds out. Lol I look forward to your next update.

Hello,

I have to say I'm melting...this was such a sweet chapter!!! I love the interaction between Kagome and the kids. And your characterization of Inu and Yasha is absolut authentic: they are indeed two diffrent charachters but share at the same time common characteristics with our adult hanyou. Well done!!!

Just a suggestion: if you edit your previous chapters try also to correct this mistake: you tend to begin a sentence with a small letter.

I really look forward to your next update!

P.S. I know this is a strange question, but did you change your name?

Oh now this should be good. I can't wait to see how sesshomaru reacts when they tell him what happened. 

Aww... the toddlers are so cute!! I can totally picture Kagome being all cuddly and motherly with them. I can’t wait for her to fill Sesshoumaru in on what has happened to InuYasha.

oh this was a tease!!!

Hello,

I'm glad I could help ;) This is a really nice chapter and I'm glad to see that it is longer than the previous two!

But there is one thing I didn't get: do Inu and Yasha somehow know they have once been one? What exactly is their relationship?

I hope the gang will not find a solution soon, insted it would be nice  if you would continue to focus on the two children: who of them will develop faster, who is more clingy, who will feel the need to protect the other, or will they be rivals? ... stuff like that ... 

I hope there will also be a lot of fighting for Kagomes attention ;)

I really see forward to your next chapter!

I forgot to mention before: as far as I remember Puritysan was volunteering for being a Beta not so long ago...try to message her. There is also a section for authors who need a Beta, or volunteer to be one, in the Doguka Forum.

Good luck!

Hello,

first of all congratulations!!! It's absolute refreshing to read about a completely new idea! I have to say that I don't remember reading about a similar plot! Therefore I would like this story to not be abandoned, like so many others...

Honestly I find your writing style good, you do not need to hesitate and be afraid of what we would think, just keep going on ;)

The only suggestion I have: try to stay in the past forms, you switch between present and past forms... 

I look forward to your next update!

Nice please update soon

I knew this would be a good story. I hope you find a beta reader. Your chapters have been good and clearly express what you want your readers to know. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Update soon onegai

Ja ne

Aw! I just adore these kinds of stories where he's changed to a cute little boy.  I'm curious to see how the little human inuyasha is going to act.

This sounds like it's going to be an awesome story! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us! 

Interesting idea never read it before! will be waiting for more

good luck!

Good first chapter Good luck I will be looking for the next chap please update soon.