Reviews for The Lost Prince by natasha

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James1996 (Chapter 12) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.


Orotami (Chapter 12) - Thu 09 Aug 2018

I have so much love for this story. Its beautiful, complex and a great read. Please update soon 


beachvilla (Chapter 12) - Wed 08 Aug 2018

Koga's minions do call her sister.  Hoping things work out on that end and they end up helping!  


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 12) - Wed 08 Aug 2018

Poor Inuyasha! I love that they are all still the best of friends, so many stories turn Inuyasha into the bad guy, I love that he's such a great friend and wants her happiness. Takashi is so mischievouss it's adorable!!!. Thanks for the update


ALostChildFromHeaven (Chapter 11) - Thu 02 Aug 2018

Really good story so far. can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work 


Loveyaa (Chapter 11) - Thu 02 Aug 2018

Oh goodness. That little pup is up to no good trying to get his parents together. Luckily Sesshoumaru's beast is on his side. And that is smart and cool of Inuyasha. I can't wait to see if it works out. For everybody. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Jennifer (Chapter 11) - Thu 02 Aug 2018

Update soon!!!!


Melissa (Chapter 11) - Mon 30 Jul 2018

I love this story!! 


Amanda Moen (Chapter 11) - Mon 30 Jul 2018

I would be willing to help beta "The Lost Prince". I have been mentally doing that while reading this story. I enjoy how quickly you have been getting the chapters out. 


VS (Chapter 10) - Mon 30 Jul 2018

Hello,

I'm SO glad that her son interfered! Kagome is sometimes just too naive for her own good and then she is in need of someone who can protect her form herself!

I like that Sesshoumaru is staring to see Kagome in another light! Though he is still ignorant about his own reactions towards her!

Let's see if Takashi can push him even more! :D


Jean (Chapter 10) - Mon 30 Jul 2018

Really enjoy your story, looking forward to the next chapter. 


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 10) - Sun 29 Jul 2018

So a couple critiques; one you might go over this one I noticed some spelling errors and improper word usage. Number two the section between Takashi and Inuyasha is very blurred. 

 

      Now my positives! I love this story and everything else flowed rather smoothly. I look forward to your next chapter


Soya Doge (Chapter 9) - Sat 28 Jul 2018

I absolutely love the story so far. I can't wait for the new chapters!


Soya Doge (Chapter 9) - Sat 28 Jul 2018

I absolutely love the story so far. I can't wait for the new chapters!


REDWOLF (Chapter 9) - Wed 25 Jul 2018

I look so forward to this story now.  I was so happy when you came up with this story. It's different and I am enjoying it so very much. Look forward to the next chapter :)


Cheyanna (Chapter 9) - Wed 25 Jul 2018

Thanks for updating!!! Can’t wait to read more!!;) 


chevonne knowles (Chapter 4) - Wed 25 Jul 2018

Sesshomaru would not act that way after the defeat of Naraku. His feelings on Humanity would have changed along with him learning compassion. I think that part of this characterization is the way he felt at the beginning.


Amber (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Jul 2018

I am totally in love with this story so far. I love the dynamics/bond of the relationship between mother(Kagome) and son. I hope the son warms up to his father(Sesshomar). This story is developing very nicely. Grammar and sentence structure are not a big deal to me for this story. Thank you for writing a wonderfully written story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!


REDWOLF (Chapter 8) - Tue 24 Jul 2018

Oh my, I hope Sesshoumaru won't be mean and start hanging after every stray and be inconsiderate to the plight Kagome will be going thruough.  This is certainly going to be interesting to see where this will go. Where is Kouga when you need him to make Sesshoumaru jealous.  I don't care much for Sesshoumaru mother. She's not tactiful at all. Well, another great chapter. Can't wait for the next. ;) 


VS (Chapter 8) - Tue 24 Jul 2018

Hello,

I love how much Kagome and Takashi have bonded. He is even waking up from sleep, because he feels her distress! How adorable!!!

But it is therefore that I think Kagome is making a mistake by reaching a decision without talking to her son. I do believe he has a right to know and this could damage their relationship...

I was actually surprised that SessMama has personal experience with a shallow mark, though I'm a bit disappointed that she didn't give more information and Kagome isn't asking a few questions of her own...

Let's see how Sesshoumaru and Takashi are going to react to her decision!

I'm looking forward to your next update!


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