Reviews for The Lost Prince by natasha

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Saeko (Chapter 13) - Sat 08 Dec 2018

I could really tell that you didn't feel like writing this. Rather than rushing to update/finish, you probably should take a breath, not update for a while, and come back to it fresh. The fight went so fast that my eyes skipped over half of it, and I didn't want to read it all. In fact, it made me not want to read the rest of the story if and when you ever get to it.


Sesskagaddict89 (Chapter 13) - Fri 07 Dec 2018

Holy guacamole this is a fan fic I can see myself rereading over and over. Please update soon 


Lorena (Chapter 13) - Thu 06 Dec 2018

Oh no... How unrealistic is my hope that every main character survived or even more crazily, that all the allies survive?


Skylar (Chapter 13) - Thu 06 Dec 2018

The shallow bite!


Toni (Chapter 13) - Wed 05 Dec 2018

really enjoy this story  hope you can find your muse again and write more chapters


Annie (Chapter 13) - Wed 05 Dec 2018

The battle scene is great!!!  I love a pissed off Kagome. Can't wait for the next update


Jennifer (Chapter 13) - Wed 05 Dec 2018

That's was a great chapter!! Dont beat yourself up! 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 12) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Great story, please update the next chapters quickly!


James1996 (Chapter 12) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.


Orotami (Chapter 12) - Thu 09 Aug 2018

I have so much love for this story. Its beautiful, complex and a great read. Please update soon 


beachvilla (Chapter 12) - Wed 08 Aug 2018

Koga's minions do call her sister.  Hoping things work out on that end and they end up helping!  


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 12) - Wed 08 Aug 2018

Poor Inuyasha! I love that they are all still the best of friends, so many stories turn Inuyasha into the bad guy, I love that he's such a great friend and wants her happiness. Takashi is so mischievouss it's adorable!!!. Thanks for the update


ALostChildFromHeaven (Chapter 11) - Thu 02 Aug 2018

Really good story so far. can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work 


Loveyaa (Chapter 11) - Thu 02 Aug 2018

Oh goodness. That little pup is up to no good trying to get his parents together. Luckily Sesshoumaru's beast is on his side. And that is smart and cool of Inuyasha. I can't wait to see if it works out. For everybody. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Jennifer (Chapter 11) - Thu 02 Aug 2018

Update soon!!!!


Melissa (Chapter 11) - Mon 30 Jul 2018

I love this story!! 


Amanda Moen (Chapter 11) - Mon 30 Jul 2018

I would be willing to help beta "The Lost Prince". I have been mentally doing that while reading this story. I enjoy how quickly you have been getting the chapters out. 


VS (Chapter 10) - Mon 30 Jul 2018

Hello,

I'm SO glad that her son interfered! Kagome is sometimes just too naive for her own good and then she is in need of someone who can protect her form herself!

I like that Sesshoumaru is staring to see Kagome in another light! Though he is still ignorant about his own reactions towards her!

Let's see if Takashi can push him even more! :D


Jean (Chapter 10) - Mon 30 Jul 2018

Really enjoy your story, looking forward to the next chapter. 


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 10) - Sun 29 Jul 2018

So a couple critiques; one you might go over this one I noticed some spelling errors and improper word usage. Number two the section between Takashi and Inuyasha is very blurred. 

 

      Now my positives! I love this story and everything else flowed rather smoothly. I look forward to your next chapter


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