Wow so so sad but the Kami have much in store for them both... On to the next chapter.
So they both forgot about ever being angels? Seems fair, they were pretty young and it was clear that just being granted wings doesn't make the person any more wise or compassionate.
I hope they remember when they meet again.
Jeez, for heaven and being so called angels those brats act more like devils. Throwing one of their own from their stupid cloud for apparently nothing at all. I hope the gods punish them just as hard.
I can't wait for more!!!!!:)
Oh my! I have some how got this hook in my mouth and it's pulling me in!
And yes I am adding this to my follow list. There is great things to come from this story. So please up date.
Everything flowed very well. But there were some grammar problems like misspelled words. But not much.
Until the next chapter.
Deana (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Feb 2018
Not bad. Interesting concept and I cn't wait to see where this goes.
Very interesting beginning to an intriguing story.
I take it that the two fallen angels are Kagome and Sesshomaru?
I'm looking forward to reading more. Please update soon.
Great job!!!
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