I liked the the licking bit, very unusual. I really liked your story, and i wish you a safe trip!!

First off I like how you ended it, it was cute and fluffy. lol seconed I hope you come back safe and sound. Good luck with your trip. hugs and puppies

Great story so far! It shows a lot of promise!! ^_______^ I wish it was longer though.... =(. Please update soon!!!!Oh and one more thing... You might want to edit the last paragraph of chapter one. It's this part: "Kagome lifted her head to gaze into his eyes when the presence she had felt came back and slammed into her jerking her gaze down to the swords at the demon lord's side when the presence slammed into her mind causing her to fall backwards unconscious." The sentences don't flow correctly 0.0 Well that's it!! Keep up the great work! ~Ayako Rin

great story, a little short but hey not bad. but small problem chapters 1,2,3,4 are there, chapter 5 the only thing there is the title. please fix.

Dude!! What happened to chapter five!! I agree with possessed and nobody, i'm tracking down the rest, but you have done a very good job so far!! *sniffing around* now where is that chapter.....

*sniffing around for more* I just know it's here somewhere... I like this and I'm trailing it... Hope for your sake you have more!

it's over? What happened? Good job . Very interesting.