I really loved this story. It read like a 'once upon a time' type fairy tale.

It was interesting to read the parts you had Sesshomaru and Inuyasha play. They weren't bickering or trying to kill each other.

They acted the way loving brothers should be. 

So who poisoned Kagome's husband?

You came up with a little of something different and it was well written to boot.

Excellent job!!!

Very well written. Good story