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Most Unlikely Angel (Chapter 51) - Fri 22 Jun 2018

Oh! And i love both endings. I could see both of them working.


Most Unlikely Angel (Chapter 51) - Fri 22 Jun 2018

This story has been one of the most amazing journeys that i have taken on this site. There were such complexities in the characters and character development. The plot was full of unexpected twists and never became predictable. I don't know how you managed to keep up with this storyline and manage to tie it all in so well. You are an exceptional author and i thank you for this work of art. You're amazing!! Keep it up

 

MUA ????


Koree (Chapter 51) - Mon 28 May 2018

Interesting but of course I like the other ending waaaaaay better lol, anywho great chap


Seluna Maru (Chapter 29) - Tue 22 May 2018

Ok I just read that they had feelings for each other, and I seriously don't see it. I honestly cannot see this version of Sesshomaru and Kagome liking each other. It feels very monotonous. The romantic build up just wasnt there. Alot of things are redundant and simply their thoughts but no heart beat, no wow she's beautiful to him, no heat, nada. I've been reading for so long and I still can't see it. The story is just good but not  enough to draw emotions. Im really surprised since its so well written and the plot is grade A+++.


Anonymous (Chapter 26) - Tue 15 May 2018

Idk why, but I feel no emotions during any romantic scenes. It feel monotonous. Typically when I find Sesshomaru is falling in love, I get butterflies. I mean this writing is great, seriously it is, but i feel almost nothing reading it at times. I mean I can't stop reading, the plot is excellent, no EXEMPLARY!! But I don't get the doki doki feeling.


VS (Chapter 51) - Tue 15 May 2018

Hello,

since you had already introduced parallel worlds and let Kagome meet once a Kagome from another world I have to say, that this ending does really fit your story!

It might be frustrating to read all the story and to learn in the last chapter, that all you have read thus far was only a dream, a possibility in a parallel world but the more I think about this alternate ending, the more I think that it suits your story even better than the previous one. 

 

Thanks for sharing!!!


DivaG (Chapter 51) - Tue 15 May 2018

This alternative ending was a surprise, but also fits well with the story. I think I will re read the whole story with the new end in mind, with Kagome spending all this time sleeping inside the jewel and dreaming of an imaginary life, and at the same time bringing Sesshoumaru into it, thus falling in love with him and making him desire and love her in the process. Either end is great, congratulations.


Shizuka Asano (Chapter 51) - Tue 15 May 2018

Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!

Everything I knew was a lie and I love it omg. If only this wasn't the end of it. I would love to see how their relationship developed in their real world. You literally never cease to bring us such crazy wonderful pieces.


Leaora (Chapter 6) - Thu 10 May 2018

“And what did Kikyo tell you?  That you will destroy me and keep my daughter away through the justice of girl power?"


I lmfao at this. Whoo!!! Please, keep it coming!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 12) - Wed 09 May 2018

Well that weren't side ways. I could have seen a cooler scenario where she wore the dress and told him eat your heart out . Just saying I dont rhing the dress was that big of a joke or something he could get mad about. 


blommie8 (Chapter 43) - Tue 08 May 2018

VS (Chapter 50) - Sun 06 May 2018

Hello,

first of all I have to tell you,  that you have my respect! We readers mostly complain that chapters get not updated fast enough, but you did literally an update marathon with extremely long chapters!!!

I love all the twist and turns you put in this story!!! They might have been confusing sometimes, but that's ok, that is the way literature works after all. Not everything has to be clear and logically!

And I liked the most the way you tried to characterize Naraku. He is in the Canon unfortunately a very simple figure, but you gave him a complex structure, with his desires, his inner demons and the way he keeps lying to himself!

And I'm happy to see that Kagome and Sesshoumaru finally managed to overcome their problem concerning intimacy - it sure took them long enough, I suffered with them while reading. They had so many problems and still had the talent to create new problems...

All in all I have to say that this is a great story, and it ended up being more then just the rewriting of...

 

I already saw that you updated two chapters of your new project, well I'm off reading them ;)

 

Well done!!!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 May 2018

I saw the endings auther note, Nice you're a hard worker I can tell. Im happy aboutt he change its all lovely so far.


DivaG (Chapter 50) - Fri 04 May 2018

Loved the story. Kagome defeated the jewel using especially her hope in a better future beside her loved ones. She never lost faith in them, never thought that they would abandon her and it became her strenght to keep going. Her meeting with her other version inside the jewel, her dark desires, made her more balanced, because she learned to go after her desires with confidencie and to accept who she really am. About that eclipse organization, it was an interesting touch, an alien organization with the power to travel between worlds, time and dimension, choose a random world, introduce the way to create a powerful artifact just to observe how its population deals with it. I do not think I like them, they are cruel in my opinion. But they succeed and even Naraku is happy with his lot in life, trying to amuse himself in prison. Great story, very well written. Congratulations.


Jane (Chapter 50) - Thu 03 May 2018

I loved this fic, I hoped for a juicier ending but it was exellent! 


Jane (Chapter 50) - Thu 03 May 2018

I loved toys fic I hoped for a juicier ending but it was exellent! 


DivaG (Chapter 49) - Wed 02 May 2018

Wow, what a great chapter. I knew that Naraku was up to something when he took Tenseiga along with Kagome, because he knew that the sword could eliminate Midoriko once for all, but I never guessed that he himself planned to do it. I never imagined that he could wield it, but he did at the cost of all the demonic power that he absorbed all this time, and even managed to free himself of Kaguya’s mark. It proves that, albeit he denies that he wants atonement, he does, and he has to have goodness in his heart and will to help another to wield this sword. But Naraku is a strange character, boasting to Kagome that he won the game proudly, but deep inside he is very happy for being able to save his daughter In the process too. Hakudoshi died for his overly confidence, but now Kagome is inside the jewel, thanks to Biakuya, and has to fight all her fears to get hid of the jewel all by herself, and I have the feeling that the celestial robe plays a key role in its destruction along with Kagome’s purity and hope.  I am anxious for the next chapter. Excellent job.


LightoftheWest (Chapter 49) - Tue 01 May 2018

Um, had a hard time reading this chapter it was too much so I gave up reading it. Please seperate the paragraphs so I can enjoy your story! 


DivaG (Chapter 48) - Wed 25 Apr 2018

It was nice that Sesshoumaru could come to terms about controlling his own fears regarding Kagome so fast, but not enough to save her from being taken by Naraku. But Naraku’s real plan is still a mistery. Through his web, it’s clear that he knows exactly what is happening inside Kagome and Sesshoumaru’s house in details, according to the conversation Kagome’s clone had with Sesshoumaru. thus, he knows that it is possible that Tenseiga can expel Midoriko’s soul from Kagome, and now the sword is missing. Could it be taken by Naraku’s web too? He purposely left Hitomiko’s forgiving nature out in the creation of the clone, which made it possible for Sesshoumaru to realize that it was not the real Kagome and even let him see that the real Kagome was still alive before taking her in order to give him hope to save her, knowing that he can trace the poison injected into Hakudoshi by his nova ants. I can not wait for the next chapter. This is really a great story. 


AthenianThief (Chapter 47) - Tue 24 Apr 2018

My heart is breaking. I just need another chapter to know they'll be okay! Poor Rin, how is she going to take Sesshomaru's news? And what about Kagome!! Ah!! How long till the next update? :D


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