I enjoyed reading this fic. I had read it before but I can't really remember at which chapter it stopped at. I do remember reading it up to the tourney scene and that Kagome had won but I'm not sure if I read up to their love scene.
Anyway, this is very well written, there are a few spelling/grammatical errors here and there throughout the chapters but it did not detract from the flow of the story.
I like that Kagome is not the meek and fragile little girl in this story, ergo, I like the strong female you have portrayed her as instead.
It seems like you made a few changes to this re-posted version of the story. I read the one chapter you posted over on FF (if that is you) and it's staus was listed as complete, anyway, that one was left with an interesting cliffhanger. I did like that version but this one is way much better, this fic has more detail.
I read one of your short one-shots over there -"Plans" and I must say you are wicked...LOL :)
I hope you complete this story...I am excitedly waiting for future updates as RL will allow you.
Excellent writing!!!
Cheers!!!
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