Reviews for Abandoned by bmo-galaxy

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 17) - Thu 18 Feb 2021

Nice chapter.

 

Happy New Year!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 16) - Mon 14 Dec 2020

Great story. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 15) - Thu 10 Dec 2020

Oh my that was an awesome chapter loved it....  I still think Kagome was being stupid in leaving the protection of the barrier she was just asking to get kidnapped....  Well hopefully things turn out well....


James1996 (Chapter 13) - Wed 10 Oct 2018

Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.


Dryft (Chapter 13) - Sat 10 Mar 2018

I really enjoy this story and you convey the characters quite well!


KyraTekak (Chapter 12) - Wed 28 Feb 2018

Hope for more updates 


Nilee1 (Chapter 12) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

You’ e Done such a good job of generating the feelings o anxiety and tread that you will have to update soon to relieve all your readers:-)


Ladyfairy (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Feb 2018

This is a reaaaaaaly great story, and I can’t wait to see what happens with it!!! I really hope that Kagome lets Sesshoumaru love her without too much of a fight!! If you’re in need of a beta I’d be more than willing to lend a hand. 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 11) - Sat 03 Feb 2018

I enjoyed reading this fic. I had read it before but I can't really remember at which chapter it stopped at. I do remember reading it up to the tourney scene and that Kagome had won but I'm not sure if I read up to their love scene.

Anyway, this is very well written, there are a few spelling/grammatical errors here and there throughout the chapters but it did not detract from the flow of the story.

I like that Kagome is not the meek and fragile little girl in this story, ergo, I like the strong female you have portrayed her as instead.

It seems like you made a few changes to this re-posted version of the story. I read the one chapter you posted over on FF (if that is you) and it's staus was listed as complete, anyway, that one was left with an interesting cliffhanger. I did like that version but this one is way much better, this fic has more detail.

I read one of your short one-shots over there -"Plans" and I must say you are wicked...LOL :)

 

I hope you complete this story...I am excitedly waiting for future updates as RL will allow you.

Excellent writing!!!

 

Cheers!!!


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