Oh that was delicious. Just perfect. 

This is so cute there is so much emotion,  I loved it can't wait to read the rest of your works

Wonderful!

great

Lovely story and so well written.  

I love that piece of artwork that you got your inspiration from and you did it justice.

Thanks for the story.  I hope you update your other stories soon.

Great job!!!

Thus envisioned everything I wanted when I saw that drawing. She stayed. Short sweet and to the point.

Perfect! 

That reminds me that I started a fic based on that picture too. 

I love your version. 

Thx for sharing!