Hey, so just a few things. The last chapter and this chapter have a few flaws.  Last chapter you stated kagome came to tgeir residence to inform sesshoumaru he was a father and that rins only wish for christmas was to meet her father befire she passes. Now in this chapter you make it out to be that she came to sesshoumaru seeking answers and then pretty much tells him to f off  becaues she dosent  want to listen to him  but then shes welcome to come visit rin as if she wasnt on deaths door....  other then that good job. Hooe that helps

Oh my gosh this is making me cry! I can’t help  but hope Rin will make it still!!!! Can’t wait till you update!!!

Oh my gosh this is making me cry! I can’t help  but hope Rin will make it still!!!! Can’t wait till you update!!!

I’m so glad inuyasha knew what to do to save Kagome! Ugh, I feel for Sesshomaru too. He didn’t know she was pregnant so he can’t be to blame there, but urgh how could he hurt Kagome like that?! 

This is is a very moving story and I can’t wait til you update again!! Good luck with classes!

Ohh why!!!! TT TT  I signed up to read this sad story and I know in the end all is not gonna be well (maybe) but I can't stop reading! I can understand all about how Sesshomaru didn't know he had a daughter, so he is not completely at fault and I want to blame him for not holding onto Kagome and giving up too easily but then Kagome disappeared completely so what could he do. But, it does not excuse that he used Kagome even if he loved her and betrayed her and cheated on her, he could have come clean and let Kagome make the decision or together come up with something. Their relationship lacked communication and genuine trust, so ofcourse it would not last......This is soooo sad TT

Please update soon....

I'm a little confused about Kagome saying that Sesshomaru never wanted a child with her and that he was unwilling to see his daughter.  I didn't see that he said that or that he had a chance to respond.  That would be a lot to take in a few seconds!  Kagome herself said in the flashback that Sesshomaru didn't know she was pregnant.  So why the acting like Sesshomaru wouldn't care at all when he had no idea?  

OMGGGGGGG....please update...the suspense is killing me....like always great chpter :3

*Why must you torture me with these unresolved endings??? :-) 

Can't wait for the next

Why must you torture me with these unresolved ending??? :-) 

Can't wait for the next

This story has me seriously enthralled! I would say I wish the chapters were longer but it seems like you’ve been updating everyday, and I know I and your other fans appreciate it! Can’t wait for more!

This is soooo sad TT TT TT TT, I hope it gets better for Kagome and we get to see what is going on in Sesshomaru's head. Please update soon.

Wow! Talk about the family confrontation. This is very good. Looking forward to more. 

The suspense! Please update soon!

Oh my...you are breaking my heart. This is so sad. Thanks for updating. Cheers!

This cliff hanger business you got going on is really cruel!!! I’m so anxious to see what happens next! Can’t wait till you update next!!!!!

Wow I am hopeful and scared of Sesshomaru's reaction. And Inuyasha knew! I can't wait for your next update

 I hope that someone can save Rin. Why would Sesshomaru betray Kagome all those years and mate someone else? Please update soon.   

I have to say I'm hooked on your story. I as so excited to see your update. You even have me shedding years over here???????????? I'm really feeling Kagome's pain. ???????????? It' has to be agonizing to have to watch your child die. I can't even imagine. I really can' wait untl your next update. I'm literally sitting on the edge of my seat.

my heart is broken for kagome! I hope Sesshomaru can find a way to be there for Kagome and his daughter!

This is so sad. I wonder how sesshomaru will react when he finds out.  I wonder if he'll be able to help her get better. I can't wait to see what happens next!