Well damn. I'm so sad now. I appreciated the heck out of their joining, but that ending broke my heart. Does this end like this?

Ohhh keep going please

Gah... I feel  like it was just getting somewhere and BAM.... it ends in horrible, horrible unhappy ending. *rips out hair*

Aww poor Sesshomaru, too bad he's so stubborn. 

Uhhhhh what just happened! This was going so well! It seems incomplete. The smut scene could use some work, but this was the makings of something good. Lol Im reading the ending first from now on so I don't get my heart broken

What a fascinating short story. I liked it very much.  

It was written very nicely...you did well.

I wonder if Kagome will ever think back on what the fortune-teller told her about how the spell could be broken. It could only be broken by the one who loves her and then realize that Sesshomaru really did love her.

It was a bittersweet ending. 

It would be really nice if there was a sequel or an epilouge...only if RL allows you the time. Looking forward to future stories from you.

Excellent writing.

Cheers!!!

Oh my god... I love it! I was like "damn, this is good but then I read the last part... the hell? No, no, author don't do this to me...." but eh I love it nonetheless. I just wished that you made it longer.. 

Well, good job author! 

Awe the ending was soooo sad! I liked the story a lot even though it was short. 

The beginning of the story made me laugh however in the end it beautifully breaks my heart... yeah you've done it perfectly! I just hope this isn't finished...or maybe write a sequel....

Thank you for sharing this with us! 

Hope to see more from you!

Aw, poor Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Enjoyed the story!  Nice writing. 

Please! You have to write a sequel! It was too beautiful to leave it like this. What happened to inuyasha? Did the spell totally break? So many questions! I feel so sad at this ending...

But I thank you very much for writing this and sharing with us! As always your writing style is amazing! 

Thank you! 

Happy holidays! 

Interesting premise! Love how u made the love spell worked in reverse because of the backward timing in Sengoku Jidai. And I like how even though Sess and Kag managed to get in each other's pants, they were still level-headed to know their joining would never lead to anything good. I also cracked up about that Shippo part, Hahaha. It's a fitting ending but it's sad at the same time. 

I wondered what happened to Inuyasha though... Love ur style of writing! Good work Laura!