333Tenshi (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 Nov 2020

This is interesting but I can't help thinking that the ages of the youkai feels off being in the thousands. Shippo is over a thousand and only looks like a 10 year old. If youkai aged that slowly wouldn't most of them die very young?


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Sun 14 Oct 2018

Oh I had to laugh a bit at the name 'You Han Nin City'.  I read it as Hanyou Ningen city and as Ningen Hanyou city.   :)

Imaginative play on words.

Cheers!!!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Sun 14 Oct 2018

I love this story. I re-read it a couple of times and I find myself hoping that you have not abandoned it because that would be so sad.  :(

I understand the reasoning behind the idea of implanting secondary cameras behind the eyes of Kagome and Kikyou because I assume it has something to do with the dangerous missions that they embark on, but I hope that they will be removed as soon as the threat of Naraku has been eradicated.  I would have an issue of privacy since the cameras can be activated remotely by HQ control.

I really hope you continue this story and will be in a position to update more regularily as possible.  I know RL takes prescidence.  :)

Great writing!!!

I hope you are doing well.

Cheers!!!


AceofSpades096 (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Jan 2018

So good! I honestly started crying at the beginning of this chapter and all the way through it. Beautiful writing and amazing ideas!!!! Keep it up <3


trinity3000 (Chapter 5) - Fri 29 Dec 2017

I was a little disturbed by the idea of cameras in their eyes.  I understand the tactical significance, but since the control room can turn them on remotely at any time, they have basically given away their right to any privacy.  Being a parent myself, if I had been Kaede I would not have let that be done to my child. No way!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Dec 2017

Absolutely lovely chapter! I love that your characters are actually developing as the story goes along - Sesshy is slowwwwly losing his rigid cold heart and Kags is just so freaking adorable along with Shippou!!! ^_^


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Dec 2017

Awesome can’t wait to read more!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 2) - Wed 27 Dec 2017

I like how you gave the information on the characters in the story. Typically, this sort of thing annoys me. However, I feel that you executed this explanation very well and helped me to understand ahead of time just who everyone is. Very nicely done!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Dec 2017

... Okay listen here.

 

This story is already awesome.

 

I really really NEED an update to this - or I MIGHT just go kinda... psycho.

 

 

^_^


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Wed 27 Dec 2017

Nice beginning to this story. It is very well written in style and formatting.

Is this story a revision from a previous posting?  It's that this story sounds vaguely familiar, although I could be way out in left field or that I  might be mistaking it for another story I may have read. Oh well, I know that I am going to enjoy reading it.

I like your setup for the story...giving the vital stats on the main players and the background story of the organization...nicely done.

I am looking forward to the next chapters to be posted...soon I hope.

Excellent job!

 

Cheers!!!


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