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Paws (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Aug 2019

♥?♥?♥?♥? i loved this


zodiak023 (Chapter 3) - Fri 08 Mar 2019

Oh wow I love this story it sounds very intriguing pls update like right now cause I can't wait for more?!?!


Cassandra G. (Chapter 3) - Tue 05 Mar 2019

Very curious to see where this goes! Love that Kagome can talk sense into Sesshoumaru and really knows how to help him not be so short-sighted.


TAMARA (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Mar 2019

Won't you smile awhile for me Sarah!!! 

 

So happy your back my originals aurthors are inspired again it makes my heart smile. Keep up the good work. Perfect Sesshoumaru depiction spot on. Im curious as to how long exactly shes been away. Idk how old kagome is now. Im a little sad shes rusty with her powers. I can feel a kickass Kagome story coming. Her fire matches but she lacks in skill. Level up kags...

 

XOXOXO

PeaceLoveDojah


marisel (Chapter 3) - Mon 04 Mar 2019

This is intriguing because if she help sess how come he did not remember when the jewel  and business the way she went without her yellow pack and it sh op with in the third chapter and again she left without the pack????  And what's with the museum girl telling her that she would go back and bamm it happen.  

You should let kagome prepare in fighting before she gets call back. After two years she is rusty in fighting skills.  Just a suggestion,  after all its your story,  but one wonder if she going to change the future by going further back....ummm that's the question.   I believe that if priesters lives then demons should too to balance the worl..


VS (Chapter 3) - Mon 04 Mar 2019

Hello,

you updated, what a nice surprise!!!!

I couldn't believe my eyes when I read that Kagome would leave Inuysha and Izayoi behind! That was unexpected.

The scene where she found Sesshoumaru and treated his wounds was really sweet and your reference with romantic movies made me laugh! :D All in all the chapter was well written and you catched my interest immediately - again.

So Kagome is back in her time now. That was unexpected too. Will she go back to the museum now? And how will the story progress? Will the well sent her to important evnts in different times? Questions after questions...

I hope you will not wait this long again to update a new chapter. And I'm looking forward to your next update!

 


marisel (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Mar 2019

It is really good start,  the plot is very enticing to continue reading.  You have my full attention and desire to follow you in this new fantastic road.  Carry on and give your best.


Saraf Anjum (Chapter 3) - Mon 04 Mar 2019

Hi dear, thank you so much for taking out your time to write this wonderful fanfiction. The story is great and very well written.

 

But there's just this one problem. This is from ch 1, "She decided against taking her yellow backpack with her, knowing that it wouldn't be of any use of her in the past.

Sure, she could take some food or a sleeping math with her but in the end, she could just as well hunt her own food and sleep in Kaede's hut as she had done countless of times before. It would only serve her as a hindrance."

 

This is from Ch 3, "She kicked the blankets off of her body and stood up before she grabbed her yellow backpack and packed her belongings as well as some food for her journey." And so on.

 

Honestly it is smart to take the bag coz she should know how dangerous and difficult life is in the Fudal Era. Maybe not a change of clothes but it helps to get medical care and matches and blanket at difficult times. Changing that line in the first chapter should do the trick, buuuuut it is clear in chapter three that she left everything behind. Will Sesshoumaru pick them up? Destroy them or just leave them behind.

Anyway, other than that, awesome work dear. Waiting for the next installment ^_^


Neelixonee (Chapter 3) - Mon 04 Mar 2019

Exciting!!! <3


VS (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

Hello,

you did really well with this chapter!

You picked up a very dramatic time for Kagome to appear. Toga is already dead and Inuyasha was killed nearly twice on the day he was born: first by the cold and then by Sesshoumaru. I like the way you describe Izayoi as a loving mother and wife! And I even like more your characterization of Sesshoumaru!!! Many focus only on Inuyasha and forget that for his elder brother this day was also the beginning of hardship - he may need Kagome even more than Inuyasha!!!

Although we encounter a lot of danger and even death in this chapter, it is not too overhelming, because you know how to break the tension a bit by the use small funny moments/jokes!!!

Well done!

 

I hope you will continue this fic, it would be a shame to abandon it!

You seem to be talented and your story shows much potential!!!

 

I look forward ro your next update!!!


VS (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

Hello,

I have to compliment you for the first chapter! It is very well written, and more important: you capture the interst of any reader. Your description of Kagomes and Sakis emotions is absolut authentic!!!

I'm excited to read who Saki is...

 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

This was a very nice chapter.  Again, it was well written except for what could be a grammatical error with the use of the word 'expect' in relation to a future event that was expected to happen.  In your sentence:

          (They looked so peaceful, blissfully unaware of all the pain and hurt that would expect them in the years coming.)

You may consider the word await in place of expect. 

I have always wondered why Toga did not take Izayoi and place her in a safe place, at least, while she was pregnant. He had to have known the possibilities of aggression toward her and their child because of their relationship.  I think that if he had, then the outcome would have been a whole lot different.  He may have lived.

I am looking forward to the future chapters that awaits us.  

Thanks for the update.

 

Excellent writing!!!


Victoria (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Jan 2018

I do I love how you started.it and would like to see where it' going


Pfairy (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Dec 2017

What a great start. Looking forward to reading more! 


Lutos (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Dec 2017

Fantastic!

hope to read more of this story.


Jackie (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Dec 2017

This is absolutely fantastic ! I never, repeat- never review stories - and i have read sooooooo many inuyasha fics -( in particular) i, like your other reviewers love the further back in time fics- you truly have a talent- i loved the museum and the vivid detail and i am interested in what other artifacts are in it, but only time will tell- honestly this story could be one of the greats and i look forward to more  - cheers !!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

I believe that I am going to love reading this story. It has piqued my interest just from the summary alone.

I love the plotlines where Kagome goes further back in time and meets a younger Sesshomaru. I look forward to reading about what Fate has in store for Kagome and what her purpose is that warrants her going that far back in time...possibly to help Sessho in someway to cope and not become the cold hearted demon he becomes after the death of his father and the birth of Inuyasha. I know it is more than that but maybe she and Sessho are destined to fall in love and change the future...just a couple of guesses.

The tour guide at the museum is intriguing. She seems to know what lies in store for Kagome's future. I wonder if she has a connection to Sessho and Inuyasha's bloodline since she seems to have their eye color. Or maybe she could be a messenger to one of the kamis' or the Fates.

It is very nicely written with a few grammatical errors that did not interrupt the flow of the story. 

And I hope you keep it going and not abandon it like a lot of other writers do with their fantastic stories.  

Looking forward to future chapters.  You did a great job!!!

 

Cheers!!!


Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

I love further back  time travelling fics! 

I am curious how you'll spin this.  

I love long chapters but honestly I couldn't wait to get to her jumping in the well. And the story at the museum was so detailed! I wonder who that tour guide is?

Update soon!


Brandie (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

Please update soon I can't wait to read more


Toni (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

really like it  can't wait for the next chapters 


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