VS (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Apr 2018


you did really well with this chapter!

You picked up a very dramatic time for Kagome to appear. Toga is already dead and Inuyasha was killed nearly twice on the day he was born: first by the cold and then by Sesshoumaru. I like the way you describe Izayoi as a loving mother and wife! And I even like more your characterization of Sesshoumaru!!! Many focus only on Inuyasha and forget that for his elder brother this day was also the beginning of hardship - he may need Kagome even more than Inuyasha!!!

Although we encounter a lot of danger and even death in this chapter, it is not too overhelming, because you know how to break the tension a bit by the use small funny moments/jokes!!!

Well done!


I hope you will continue this fic, it would be a shame to abandon it!

You seem to be talented and your story shows much potential!!!


I look forward ro your next update!!!

VS (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Apr 2018


I have to compliment you for the first chapter! It is very well written, and more important: you capture the interst of any reader. Your description of Kagomes and Sakis emotions is absolut authentic!!!

I'm excited to read who Saki is...


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

This was a very nice chapter.  Again, it was well written except for what could be a grammatical error with the use of the word 'expect' in relation to a future event that was expected to happen.  In your sentence:

          (They looked so peaceful, blissfully unaware of all the pain and hurt that would expect them in the years coming.)

You may consider the word await in place of expect. 

I have always wondered why Toga did not take Izayoi and place her in a safe place, at least, while she was pregnant. He had to have known the possibilities of aggression toward her and their child because of their relationship.  I think that if he had, then the outcome would have been a whole lot different.  He may have lived.

I am looking forward to the future chapters that awaits us.  

Thanks for the update.


Excellent writing!!!

Victoria (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Jan 2018

I do I love how you started.it and would like to see where it' going

Pfairy (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Dec 2017

What a great start. Looking forward to reading more! 

Lutos (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Dec 2017


hope to read more of this story.

Jackie (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Dec 2017

This is absolutely fantastic ! I never, repeat- never review stories - and i have read sooooooo many inuyasha fics -( in particular) i, like your other reviewers love the further back in time fics- you truly have a talent- i loved the museum and the vivid detail and i am interested in what other artifacts are in it, but only time will tell- honestly this story could be one of the greats and i look forward to more  - cheers !!

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

I believe that I am going to love reading this story. It has piqued my interest just from the summary alone.

I love the plotlines where Kagome goes further back in time and meets a younger Sesshomaru. I look forward to reading about what Fate has in store for Kagome and what her purpose is that warrants her going that far back in time...possibly to help Sessho in someway to cope and not become the cold hearted demon he becomes after the death of his father and the birth of Inuyasha. I know it is more than that but maybe she and Sessho are destined to fall in love and change the future...just a couple of guesses.

The tour guide at the museum is intriguing. She seems to know what lies in store for Kagome's future. I wonder if she has a connection to Sessho and Inuyasha's bloodline since she seems to have their eye color. Or maybe she could be a messenger to one of the kamis' or the Fates.

It is very nicely written with a few grammatical errors that did not interrupt the flow of the story. 

And I hope you keep it going and not abandon it like a lot of other writers do with their fantastic stories.  

Looking forward to future chapters.  You did a great job!!!



Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

I love further back  time travelling fics! 

I am curious how you'll spin this.  

I love long chapters but honestly I couldn't wait to get to her jumping in the well. And the story at the museum was so detailed! I wonder who that tour guide is?

Update soon!

Brandie (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

Please update soon I can't wait to read more

Toni (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

really like it  can't wait for the next chapters 

Cheyanna (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

I liked your summary so I know I will like your story. I can’t wait till update again!!! I am actually excited to see how it plays out since every time she goes back further in time its usually in the time of Inupapa‘s reign or at the ending of it admittedly. So I’m excited to read more! 

MagicTuchi (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

OMG I‘m going to enjoy this fanfic! 

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