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Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Wed 31 Jan 2018

Ah, this chapter was a little intense.  It made me teary-eyed because I had a friend that was abused as a child by her mother and step-father.

We were kids and not able to do anything about it back in those days and later she had so many problems...she died in her mid-twenties.

I felt what Kagome felt for Sessho.

His mother really needs to die and soon...she is a monster with no redeeming qualities that I can see.

Hmm...Kagome should accidently purify her to hell. That way she won't be around when her and Sessho have their pups.  

Am I jumping the gun here?...lol :)

Outstanding chapter and excellently written.  Looking forward to more future chapters.

I just love this story. Thank you for sharing it.

Hope you are feeling much better from your illness.

 

Cheers!!!


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 14) - Wed 31 Jan 2018

Ohh my gosh so cute!!!!!!! This chapter has revealed alot thank you and I'm betting she will regret calling him weak in the end. Lol I can't wait for your next update.


Nicole (Chapter 14) - Tue 30 Jan 2018

Ah, so Sesshomaru's mother really is the cause of all his problems ;p


Natalia (Chapter 14) - Tue 30 Jan 2018

I absolutely love this! everything was perfect and I felt so sad for them both.... this will bring a new closeness to them.

and the last scene melted my heart!

a very big thank you for updating!


SammyJams (Chapter 14) - Tue 30 Jan 2018

Oh snap! Now Sessh just needs to realize his feelings!


SammyJams (Chapter 12) - Sun 28 Jan 2018

Never ever apologize for anxiety and depression - know that there are people that care and want to help. Rest. Relax. Regroup. Rebuild. 


Deb (Chapter 13) - Fri 26 Jan 2018

Very nicely done! I'm glad to see Kagome getting back on her feet.... but his mom is gonna be a hard variable to handle for sure! Let's hope that there's something that she likes about Kagome or that sparks Kagome to prove herself and get back even more of her spirit. 

 

I'm glad you're feeling even just a little better. Take your time =)


Natalia (Chapter 13) - Fri 26 Jan 2018

I so much enjoyed this chapter that I didn't want the end to come. 

It's so nice to see Sesshomaru caring, the scene with the hair made me squeel like a school girl. 

And I am so happy Kagome had that dream and Sesshomaru protected her lol. 

And.... Dun dun dun. The mother is here. The witch of the west. 

I am glad you are feeling better. 

Thx very much for updating. 


Jean (Chapter 12) - Fri 26 Jan 2018

Good to see you maybe feeling a bit better.

As usual awesome chapter, had to laugh after reading what happened to Sango and Miroku. Looking forward to the drama that is about to start with Sesshomaru' s mother being at his home. 


Nicole (Chapter 13) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

I'm delighted to see you writing and feeling better!

Sango and Miroku's situation made me snort with laughter!

You caught me by surprise with the revelation that the Eastern Lord making war on Sesshomaru is actually a woman. Is it actually his mother? Or is her arrival a coincidence? (Though I'll admit to having that thought before she showed up in his study.)

I loom forward to next week's update!


Deb (Chapter 12) - Tue 16 Jan 2018

Sorry that life isn't being very nice to you right now, but it's just a difficult period. Nothing lasts forever, not even bad things. 

 

Also, YOU WRITE SO MUCH!!! I left Dokuga for a few days to write a chapter for my fan fiction and suddenly you've done 3 chapters in the time it takes me to do one.

 

I look forward to seeing what happens next, but please take care of yourself first. Eat good for you things and drink lots of water and get some damn sleep and fresh air! Grandma Deb recommends it 10/10. (Not actually a Grandma, but big enough on self-care and doing whatever makes you happy to be one.)


Nicole (Chapter 12) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

Kudos to you for this chapter, it is well written. And thanks to the Potion Master, Kagome doesn't have to stay with Sesshomaru any more. I wonder if either of them have realized it...?

Take care of yourself! Out of control mental illness is awful. I'm glad that you can recognize it (I still have a hard time).


Cheyanna (Chapter 12) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

Take all the time you need then, we’ll be waiting patiently for your return. i hope everything turns out alright. 


Natalia (Chapter 12) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

Ah such a good chapter. Again. 

Sesshomaru behaved like a feudal lord is supposed to behave, meanwhile trying to protect her mentality. I am do proud of him!

And Kagome... Poor Kagome... The results of her abuse are starting to get more visible and deep. Sesshomaru has to help her. 

I also liked the insight in Sesshomaru’s family and matters as well as the fact that the villages are human. 

Thx for updating such a good chapter. Ad always a pleasure to read. 

Have a great day! 

PS. Thx for the shout out, but it's your own merit. I am but a humble advisor! 


Sessygurl (Chapter 12) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

We understand. Your health is the most important thing. Thank you for working so hard on the update. It was very good.


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 12) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

I really thought I had skipped a chapter when I began reading this one. Definitely very confusing. 


DivaG (Chapter 11) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

It does seem that Sesshoumaru cares more for Kagome than even he realizes, and it will be very important to her psychological recovery. Great chapter.


Shelaughed (Chapter 11) - Fri 12 Jan 2018

Thanks for updating quickly because I'm really enjoying your story.  It's well written and I'm hooked.


Natalia (Chapter 11) - Fri 12 Jan 2018

I am in awe by this chapter! It was so touching and left a pleasant warmth in my chest. The way he thought of her, how he did dive in after her without reluctance. How he worried that she would have nightmares. And how he shared his own scars. I am so proud of him! And it seems that his arm will regrow. Yay. I wonder if his scar will fade? I am so happy Kagome’s face is healed! 

Anyway this is my favourite chapter so far! You did an amazing job! 

Thx for updating! I enjoyed every word! 


Jean (Chapter 11) - Fri 12 Jan 2018

How dare Toga blame Sesshomaru for being hurt by his mother!! He's a pup for goodness sake. He should be protected by his mother not hurt by her, and for something as trivial as playing with his cousin. Toga needs a good thrashing. Glad to see Sesshomaru sharing his experience with Kagome to help her on her road to recovery. 

Great chapter as usual, very emotive stuff. 


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