Niomi (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Nov 2017

What a beautiful piece. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you! It was sweet & simple, yet very in character but realistic enough that I totally felt for them both. I dont normally like speech in italic but this one and only time, was a great exception. Can't wait for more ideas to come to you!


VesVes (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Nov 2017

Man this was super solid, I always enjoy a sense of detachment in this pairing and you capture it well. I'm not really into the fact that he waited until her wedding day to come for her but it still seems so much like him, I bet on some leve he was exasperated that she left it up to him to come for her and will tease her about it for the rest of their lives together. You made it so easy to picture them and their liitle chats. Really you did a great job. 


Amanda (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Nov 2017

Grade A some good stuff right there 8D


Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Nov 2017

I absolutely loved it. Great work.


Ryo chan (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Nov 2017

chaotic messy love, loved it 


auri wampler (Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Nov 2017

Will there be a part 2??? PLZ MAKE A PT. 2

 


Lynn (Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Nov 2017

This is honestly so cute. Ugh. My teeth have rotted out of my head from how sweet this is. I just. Ugh. Thank you for this.


emma (Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Nov 2017

I loved this! Usually one shots feel rushed and unfinished to me, but this felt complete and balanced. I also liked how it wasn't cluttered with meaningless dialogue between characters, everything had purpose. Please write more fics soon!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Nov 2017

Absolutely breathtaking. I was caught up in the moment.

At the end, I thought for sure he would say "I love you", but like is good. It would lead to those three little words later. :)

Very lovely and very well written.  I hope this leads to an epilouge, maybe? lol

Excellent work!!!

Cheers!


Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Nov 2017

Beautiful, real and touching! As everything by you! I enjoyed it a lot thanks!

It was so believable and so "them"! I am glad he stopped the wedding! I would not mind another chapter!

Thanks for posting!


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