Reviews for Uncontrollable by Krystalina

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princess of the western lands (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 Nov 2017

Very good story. I like how she's fighting against him and also how kagome has realized her powers but hasn't turned into this all powerful being. Why did the well close? Where were the tachi, because someone must have heard or felt something? Where's sesshomaru taking kagome now?

She healed him but did he get his arm back too or just heal the burns?

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


ponpiri (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 Nov 2017

The story so far reads a bit rushed. I like that you have so many chapters within a short span of time, but wouldn't mind waiting a bit longer if that means the errors will be fixed. There are free spell checkers online if you don't have access to a word processor to check your work. 


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 4) - Wed 15 Nov 2017

Moooorrrreeeeee pppplleeeaasssseee


Deana (Chapter 4) - Wed 15 Nov 2017

Awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter


Annie (Chapter 4) - Wed 15 Nov 2017

What a chase. Sesshomaru is persistent. Kagome did right by not purifying him.


LightoftheWest (Chapter 4) - Wed 15 Nov 2017

I am really loving this story so far ! thanks for the up keep of updating. 


Ryo chan (Chapter 4) - Wed 15 Nov 2017

Your awesome!! 2 chapters in one week I'm so happy I could die, well maybe not die. I wouldnt be able to read your story if did, thank you, thank you! Love that you made kagome a fighter! Can't wait to see what's in store for them =)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Wed 15 Nov 2017

Wow...all I wanted to say was 'go Kagome go' like a cheerleade. She did her best but slowly she will have to submit. I hope she can get a few more licks at Sessho.

I love Sessho (sometimes when he's not being a meanie) but a demon got to do what a demon got to do. Kagome will more than likely become the next Lady of the Western Lands and a mother to Sess' first heir and I hope it's a male...full blood with immunity to holy power and he should be able to control it and use it...that would be so cool.  Maybe he can be a mini Sessho or maybe they can have twin mini Sessos. He will be so proud but does he have to spoil it by raping his future mate and mother to his pups?

The chase scene was amazing and a little bit hilarious. Poor Kagome...never can catch a break. LOL

Looking forward to future updates when RL allows it. 

Cheers to another great job done!!!


Lorena (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Nov 2017

Hell yeah!  I love Sesshomaru,  most of the time, but this assertiveness/confidence is practically flirting and I find him adorable for it! I'm curious how you will have their offspring, though. Will they be half demon half spiritual, or full blooded with holy immunities or some new twist?


cassandra (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Nov 2017

Oh wow who knew sesshomaru was such a pervert. Admiring her butt like that!  I love your story and can't wait to see what happens next! 


Roseanna (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Nov 2017

Great story so far.  I am glad that Kagome is going to not just give in to Sesshomaru's proclamation.  I look forward to reading about the chase and subsequent  aftermath should he catch her.  (Though we know he will based upon the summary for this story.)  I also hope that Kagome's spirit isn't easily broken nor that she just gives in to the mating.  I am eagerly anticipating more chapters; please update soon!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Nov 2017

This was a nice update. It was well written and you did great without a beta. No spelling or grammatical errors that I could see...Awesome!!!

This was actually a humerous chapter. At least she did try what I was thinking about in my chapter two review, but it did'nt work. LOL  :)

Kagome seems to be using her smarts in evading and consealment. Good for her. She is going to give Sess a run for his money and she is not going to go down without a fight.

Love this story so far. Looking forward to future updates.  Excellent job!!!

Cheers!


maria (Chapter 2) - Mon 13 Nov 2017

Mooorree I love a good cat n mouse fic


auri wampler (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Nov 2017

It is really food so far! I wonder what will happen next


Toni (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Nov 2017

like this looking forward to more chapters 


Koi (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Nov 2017

This is such a great start! I can't wait until your next update!!


Ryo chan (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Nov 2017

Nooo, I'm dying can't wait for the next chapter, oh kagome is in for it now 


Lonelylulaby (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Nov 2017

Ooooooooh shoot, this is hella interesting. You would think Kags would get somebody to teach her demon culture if she's gonna be staying in the past but no, rarely does that happen.

 

ja me till next time


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

Wow. A nice beginning to what seems like it's going to be an interesting story.

There are a few spelling/grammatical errors but it did not detract from the flow of the story.

As I was reading I wondered why Kagome just didn't jump into the well instead of just standing there trying to figure out what unnerved her. Reading a little further, you did explain why she did what she did. I'm glad you explained because if you hadn't I would have said, "what the hell, is she stupid or what?" LOL

Anyway, looking forward to future updates and keep up the good Job!

Thanks for a new story to read and welcome :)


Minime (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

I cant wait for the next chapter.


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