Awesome. Exciting battle scene...had my heart racing...hehehe!!!
Awww, Kagome losing her arm like that and my poor Sessho :(
Nice writing in both chapters one and two. Keep up the good work.
Looking forward to more chapters.
Wow that battle scene wasn't bad. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update soon! Also wow what a mean cliffhanger you left there. One moment i'm like ' what! Kagome's arm!!!! ' then I'm like ' cliffhanger!' So yeah please update soon.
Natalia (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Nov 2017
Interesting and unexpected!
The carnage was yucky.... Bleh.. the description was good! Kagome's arm! Poor kagome!
More details would be nice, to see the bigger picture! But I enjoyed it! It definitely caught my attention!
Will inuyasha die? I hope not!
Curious for more!
Good luck!
Wow this is so good looking forward to seeing more.
M.K. (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Nov 2017
Hello,
I am really enjoying this story so far, one thing I would suggest would probably be longer chapters, not necesarily with content moving forwrd, but with more details. Other than that, I hope you send a new chapter in soon!!
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