| Awesome. Exciting battle scene...had my heart racing...hehehe!!! Awww, Kagome losing her arm like that and my poor Sessho  :( Nice writing in both chapters one and two. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more chapters.    
 | Wow that battle scene wasn't bad. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update soon! Also wow what a mean cliffhanger you left there. One moment i'm like ' what! Kagome's arm!!!! ' then I'm like ' cliffhanger!' So yeah please update soon.    
 
Natalia (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Nov 2017 | Interesting and unexpected!  The carnage was yucky.... Bleh.. the description was good! Kagome's arm! Poor kagome! More details would be nice, to see the bigger picture! But I enjoyed it! It definitely caught my attention!  Will inuyasha die? I hope not!  Curious for more! Good luck!    
 | Wow this is so good looking forward to seeing more.    
 
M.K. (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Nov 2017 | Hello,   I am really enjoying this story so far, one thing I would suggest would probably be longer chapters, not necesarily with content moving forwrd, but with more details. Other than that, I hope you send a new chapter in soon!!    
       
 
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