Reviews for Consequence by Ashlyn Braere

ponpiri (Chapter 14) - Sun 12 Nov 2017

Kagome's soul can't pass on because she hadn't been born yet! OMG if Kagome ends up in Kikyo's body!!!

 

Keep going. I love the slightly longer chapters. 


Natalia (Chapter 14) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

A nice twist! Is he going to sesshoumaru? 

 So eager for more! Thx for updating!


Nicole (Chapter 14) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

Hmmmm.

I can’t imagine who Inuyasha thinks can help, other than Sesshomaru, though I have a hard time picturing him thinking Sesshomaru would help Kikyo in any way. 

I look forward to future developments. :)


Nicole (Chapter 13) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

Oh no! That sucks. 


Nicole (Chapter 12) - Tue 07 Nov 2017

Hmm. Is she getting the rest of her soul back now so that she can finish “passing on?” I’ll admit, I was not expecting the Shinidamachu to make an appearance. 

On a more practical note, did some words or letters get cut off at the beginning of Chapter 12?


Nicole (Chapter 10) - Sun 05 Nov 2017

*raised eyebrows*

Somehow, I do not think that what has surprised Miroku is Kagome. 


Natalia (Chapter 10) - Sun 05 Nov 2017

Did he see her? Did he?

Oh God I hope he did!

Thx for updating!


Nicole (Chapter 8) - Sat 04 Nov 2017

Curious. I’m guessing that whatever protections Kaede has on her but are keeping Kagome away, but it’s strange that she’s getting caught on living things. I look forward to finding out why. 


Natalia (Chapter 8) - Fri 03 Nov 2017

Oh I hope inuyasha at least will feel her!

Thx for updating!


Natalia (Chapter 5) - Wed 01 Nov 2017

I hope for once she will realize sesshoumaru an awesome sword and go look for him! Usually it's him simply finding her spirit but I hope she will be the one to remember tenseiga! So eager to read more! Thanks for posting!


Natalia (Chapter 3) - Wed 01 Nov 2017

Interesting! I like the concept!

Is tenseiga calling to her! Will sesshoumaru be able to see her? So curious! 

I like it! Hope to read more soon!


InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 3) - Wed 01 Nov 2017

Sound's like you got a good one started. I hope you finish it!


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