A lovely little story. It brought back memories when I was young and in love with a soldier during the Vietnam war. Nicely written, a few spelling erors but it didn't take away from the concept of the story. Great job!!!
A very sweet tale. I loved it.
Left me with a deep heaviness in my chest and I fought the tears...Beautiful little piece. You have some typos but hey, the fic was good and I like the song too. Good job.
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