Please continue with this story. Its one of the best I've ever read.
Inuyasha is such a jerk here, babbling things he knows nothing about and how he treats Kagome has always irked me.
It confuses me that sometimes Anubis and Sesshomaru are on the same page and others they are separate people. The last part of Anubis not knowing jealousy sounded omninous haha Will that change soon? Especially with how events are aligning with cannon, I mean, I kinda miss Jaken and Ah-Un and Rin but not much. What I feels that is missing is how little contact with strong emotions Sesshomaru has. From what I have read so far Sesshomaru is not really in love with Kagome, he's just doing what he was born to do for Anubis or something like that? So it does make sense that Kagome wouldn't be fixated solely on him either apart from an inate fascination coming from Ikoris.
I love how the story is progressing, the only thing I feel is being shoved aside is the other characters. Like the antagonist, the other gods, Kagome's friends and family and what about Sesshomaru's social life? (I mean, we know his Social Life is a desert, but even deserts are thriving with life).
Another wonderful chapter this was, thanks!!
Toni (Chapter 4) - Wed 17 Jan 2018
so totally enjoying this story looking forward to many more chapters
Very good so far. Keep going on the path you are. Enjoying reading.
I like The fact that you are allowing Kagome to grow away from Sesshoumaru and basically learning for herself instead of just having him immediately take her away. I’m kinda said that both of his parents had to be disinterested in him but I understand the need. I’m very eager to see how you play out certain evenets in the story and what you keep the same. Looking forward to your next update!
Jean (Chapter 4) - Mon 08 Jan 2018
Wonderful chapter. I like how you keep the story the same with the small changes. Can't wait for the next chapter!
This is a wonderful story! I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully updates come often!
Natalia (Chapter 4) - Sun 07 Jan 2018
I so hoped she wouldn't fall for inuyasha...
Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Thx for updating.
Skylar (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Jan 2018
Amazing! I love the twist you created. Very unique.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Great story so far......I am looking forward to how she learns who Sesshoumaru really is.
Awesome chapte!!! Can’t wait to read more!!
This story's point of reference is fabulous. The imagination is such a wonderful thing. So far, I have enjoyed the story. Can hardly wait for an update to see the progression. Of course, life does happen...hope you can do it after the holidays settle down. ????
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