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sis (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 May 2018

Great story update soon please


princess of the western lands (Chapter 4) - Wed 07 Mar 2018

Please continue with this story. Its one of the best I've ever read.

 

Update soon omega

 

Ja ne


TekoloKuautli (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Jan 2018

Inuyasha is such a jerk here, babbling things he knows nothing about and how he treats Kagome has always irked me.

It confuses me that sometimes Anubis and Sesshomaru are on the same page and others they are separate people. The last part of Anubis not knowing jealousy sounded omninous haha Will that change soon? Especially with how events are aligning with cannon, I mean, I kinda miss Jaken and Ah-Un and Rin but not much. What I feels that is missing is how little contact with strong emotions Sesshomaru has. From what I have read so far Sesshomaru is not really in love with Kagome, he's just doing what he was born to do for Anubis or something like that? So it does make sense that Kagome wouldn't be fixated solely on him either apart from an inate fascination coming from Ikoris.

I love how the story is progressing, the only thing I feel is being shoved aside is the other characters. Like the antagonist, the other gods, Kagome's friends and family and what about Sesshomaru's social life? (I mean, we know his Social Life is a desert, but even deserts are thriving with life).

Another wonderful chapter this was, thanks!!


Toni (Chapter 4) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

so totally enjoying this story   looking forward to many more chapters 


Hopeless Romantic (Chapter 4) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Very good so far. Keep going on the path you are. Enjoying reading.


Brittney (Chapter 4) - Tue 09 Jan 2018

I like The fact that you are allowing Kagome to grow away from Sesshoumaru and basically learning for herself instead of just having him immediately take her away. I’m kinda said that both of his parents had to be disinterested in him but I understand the need. I’m very eager to see how you play out certain evenets in the story and what you keep the same. Looking forward to your next update!


Jean (Chapter 4) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

Wonderful chapter. I like how you keep the story the same with the small changes. Can't wait for the next chapter!


Christine (Chapter 4) - Sun 07 Jan 2018

This is a wonderful story! I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully updates come often! 


Natalia (Chapter 4) - Sun 07 Jan 2018

I so hoped she wouldn't fall for inuyasha... 

Can't wait to see the next chapter. 

Thx for updating. 


Skylar (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Jan 2018

Amazing! I love the twist you created. Very unique.

Can't wait to see what happens next!


sesshykagslvr (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Jan 2018

Great story so far......I am looking forward to how she learns who Sesshoumaru really is.


Cheyanna (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Jan 2018

Awesome chapte!!! Can’t wait to read more!!


S4toonee (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Dec 2017

This story's point of reference is fabulous.  The imagination is such a wonderful thing.  So far, I have enjoyed the story. Can hardly wait for an update to see the progression.  Of course, life does happen...hope you can do it after the holidays settle down.  ????


princess of the western lands (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Nov 2017

Oh wow, I was so excited to see a new chapter for this story. Excellently written as usual and such details to describe what cannot be seen by mortal eyes. I love the slow and seamless crossing between Japan and Egypt. Will sesshomaru approach kagome right away or wait? Sesshomaru and Anubis will be quite sad that kagome is infatuated with inuyasha. Will nearly everything be like the original story line or with some differences? I know it's said that no one remembers their past lives but will kagome remember hers? 

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


Natalia (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Nov 2017

Beautiful chapter!

So sesshoumaru is sesshoumaru but not sesshoumaru we know right? And I am still confused about the merging of the two but we will see alongside the plot! Will sesshoumaru loose himself? Or will Anubis disappear more? So many questions!

I can't wait to see the meeting! Kagome is in for a big surprise!

And the duo is in for surprises as well as seeing what role will inuyasha have in her life! Lol

Thanks for updating


Zinhle (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Nov 2017

wow! what a story, i can't wait until they meet. thanks for the story.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Nov 2017

I am trully amazed by this story so far. You have done a wonderful job of mixing Ancient Egyptian and Japanese mythology with a dash of actual points of historical facts into the Inuyasha fandom. It is brilliant, exciting and a joy to read.  

I loved chapter two. The unfolding of Anubis and Ikoris' relationship, their romantic love-making, Ikoris' death, and the emotional impact it had on Anubis was so heartfelt. Your description of their love-makng even aroused me. LOL  :)

The personification of Sesshomaru's beast as the embodiment of Anubis is a stroke of real imagination. It gives an in-depth meaning behind Sesshomaru's actions, thinking and personality. I also liked your idea of why Sesshomaru's childhood was the way it turned out to be. Also I liked your explanation of his 'real' feelings toward his relationship with his parents and his initial feelings and treatment of Inuyasha.

I love your rendition of why Kagome was chosen and how she came to be in Feudal Japan. I am looking forward to how you explain the 'real' reasons behind Kagome's feelings regarding Inuyasha. I would like to know why the gods decided to create a soul, such as hers, in the first place.

I'm all hyped up about the upcoming chapters to this intriguing story. Please post more soon. Excellent writing job!!!


TekoloKuautli (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Nov 2017

Yay, new chapter! I like how this explains a little the fandom's 'inner beast' of Sesshomaru's but this dog is totally different, he has made no contact with Inuyasha and is not envious about his father's favoritism, also it looks like Inu no Taisho never had enough relation with his son and never gave him Tenseiga. A little sad about that because you'd think the old dog would have at least tried.

This Sesshomaru is so much more cold and detached, amazingly enough I believe with his upbringing he'd have a harder time trying to win Kagome over than his canon self since she is a people's person and all. It'd creep her out his obsession with her and his complete indiference to everything else, including the life/death of his only brother and all manners of life forms on Earth. Scratch that, she'd prefer the brash and wild Inuyasha than the emotionless and cold guy she won't be able to figure out no matter what her soul's attraction says, I imagine he'd slay people for insulting her and the like.

What about Jaken, Ah-Un and Rin? Jaken is convenient since he does simple bothersome things for him and Ah-Un carries stuff too.

Ohh~ I wanna read more! I love how you write :D


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Mon 20 Nov 2017

Ooooo this is pretty intense! Talk about love that transcends everything including time and the mortal plane! I like Sesshomaru’s attitude, I just always saw him as uncaring to most things and I’m amused at how alike Anubis and Sesshomaru are right now. I can’t wait until Kagome arrives on the scene! 


Haven Himori (Chapter 3) - Mon 20 Nov 2017

Another amazing chapter. I hope you update soon!


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