Reviews for The Shoot by Dunkelgelb

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SmilingFool (Chapter 9) - Mon 21 Jun 2021

A plot revealed oh boy wonder what it will come down too...  Can't believe Inu Yasha is in on it...  LOL too good sex with the taisho's all of them damn loop it around once more...  A tight nit family don't ya think...  lol..  This was an insightful chapter loved it.


Sessygurl (Chapter 9) - Mon 21 Jun 2021

Aww man. Thanks for the update. I cannot wait to see what the proposal is.


Nathaniel z Alexandria (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Apr 2020

Oh my, oh my. Kikyo has something planned. Time to wait for Tue next chapter


VS (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Apr 2020

I just loved how actor Sesshoumaru and real Sesshoumaru started to blend throughout the story, especially in this chapter!!! It started with his urge to "bread" and ended with his proposal to meet them in private.

He was actually really cute when he was nervous about asking. I liked that! ;) His politeness also added to his character. It was considerate of him to ask Kagome if she was ok with Kikyo's action. That he was ready to stop her says a lot about him.

I also liked the glimpse we got of Kikyo's character. This obsessive need to be in control of just everyone and everything suits her. Though I just can't warm up to her. XD

Curious to find out what she meant by "one more seal and it's done".

 

You did well! Can't wait for the incoming plot twist! *jumps up and down* :P


Pat Wim (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Apr 2020

While I like the story I am trying to figure out what the Plot is 


wonderbug (Chapter 6) - Thu 02 Apr 2020

LOL just realized my review got posted for Ch1, not Ch6! But the sentiment applies to your work as a whole - UH-MAZ-ING!! 

Keep up the awesomeness & take care!!

<3


wonderbug (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Apr 2020

Ahhhh! You're evil, downright EVIL XD That ending....jesus christ!!!!!!!

Hahaha seriously though, whew! That was a helluva scene. The richness of your descriptions is mesmerizing and delectable as always. ;) I could literally feel the "wall of pure, male thermal energy" lol! And omg, I had to blink and re-read this, but once I got it, I seriously died:

"C:YoukaiJapanInu.exe had encountered an illegal operation in his head and was forced to restart abruptly!"

XDDD

As a programmer, I have to say this absolutely slayed me lolol

Oh, and thanks to you, I now have a new fave descriptive phrase: "living silk" <3 x a million

There really are no words for your words - your style is just sinful, and I mean that in the best way possible. Hehe! Keep up the fantasticly dirty work, my friend! Now, I'm gonna go try to recover from all the brain-gasms hahaha

Looking forward to chapter 7!!!!!!!

<3 <3 <3


susie (Chapter 6) - Thu 26 Dec 2019

Absolutely filthy.  I love it.

You manage to be graphic without making it gross, so thank you.

I also really enjoy the farce of them playing 'themselves' in the movie, so we can watch them in character; yet at the same time not.

The length is impressive.  Also, the chapters are really long (lol).

Great job.


Shanika (Chapter 6) - Mon 23 Dec 2019

WHOEVER YOU ARE YOU HAVE THE MOST SEXUAL DETAILS I HAVE EVER READ. I REALLY FELT LIKE I WAS THERE WITH THEM. FEELING EVERYTHING THEY WAS FEELING. GOOD FUCKING JOB. YOU NADE MY FUCKING NIGHT XOXO


VS (Chapter 6) - Mon 23 Dec 2019

Your writing was as always exceptional! I expected nothing less from you. The chapter was hot and the details on point. I think my favourite one was the moment Sesshoumaru forgot what the script said. XD It was nice to see a more "human" side of him. You always decribe him as perfect and I think this small detail added a nice touch to his person.

I liked the scene where Sango could feel his heartbeat within her. It was kind of ... romantic? I don't know how to describe it else. I think Sesshoumaru starts to get attached to them.

I'm curious to see how the story unfolds and with what kind of plot twist you are going to surprise us!


Orotami (Chapter 6) - Mon 23 Dec 2019

It's wonderful to see an update! I can't wait for this plot twist. I'm already back on fire from this story and can't wait to read more! 


wonderbug (Chapter 5) - Fri 18 Jan 2019

OMG, when I saw you'd updated again, I almost died! From happiness of course XD

Woohoo, gotta love that SessKag action! Words can't express how deliciously raunchy your scenes are - but I gotta say I absolutely looooved the intimacy in their encounter. Made it even that much more erotic (how is that even possible?? lol)! The fangirl in me was doing cartwheels when he admitted that she was the best he'd ever had hehehe Oh man... (fans self)

Anyway, you are absolutely EVIL for ending the chapter where you did!! Kagome opening Sango to him should be the START of a chapter, not the ending! Hahaha but I'm just being greedy. ;)

You know I'll be anxiously awaiting that next chapter!! Keep up the awesome writing, my friend! <3

 


Orotami (Chapter 5) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

As always, it's a pleasure reading this. Hopefully, we see another update sooner than later. Till then! 


Cheyanna (Chapter 5) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

Thanks for updating! Can’t wait to read more!!:) 


Sessygurl (Chapter 5) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Hot hot hot! Seems like Sesshoumaru has a bit of fondness towards Kagome. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update. 


VS (Chapter 5) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Oh.My.God. This chapter was so damn hot!!! 

I love how you are able to describe every second of the ecounter so extensive without being boring or repetitive. Your repertoire of adjectives is just amazingly diverse. Well done! It was almost like I was a part of that binding spell!

The small details you put into the story (for example Kagome and Sesshoumaru hugging, or nuzzling) where really nice and kind of romantic. Also that it was Sesshoumaru who had difficulties to stay in character was awesome! I truly think that this detail added to the hotness of this chapter!

You choose the marking (italic) of "special" words wisely and in combination with your usage of ambiguous phrases it had a great impact!

I was hangig on every single word. Just wow. 

 

I'm looking forward to your next update!

 


VS (Chapter 4) - Tue 11 Sep 2018

Hello,

what I really like about this fic is, that it is not just simply sex you are describing. You built all this sex scenes in an actual plot and this fact makes your story very interesting!

All the chapters so far are giving me the impression, that you think things really through! For example your explanation, why a miko and a taijiya have sexual experience or - since chapter 4 hadn't that much plot - the constant reminder through Kikyou and her camera that we are still in the Feudal setting with a film script!

I also like your writing style, it is confident and mature and thus appropriate for this story! Though you seem to love exaggerations...everything is big and heavy and Sango and Kagome are not enough you just put 12 other hot girls into the room and even connect them all together :) I'm sure you would love to be in Sesshoumaru's position wouldn't you ;)

Anyway I'm really curious to see where you will be going with this story! And I'm looking forward to your next update!

P.S. I'm so glad you changed your picture...it was scaring the shit out of me every time I got on you profile!


wonderbug (Chapter 4) - Sat 08 Sep 2018

I bow to your porn-writing talents! Best smut fic I’ve ever read - keep up the fantastic work!!

(Also, if you’re not already a professional writer, you should strongly consider it! You have a truly amazing way with words.)


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 4) - Sun 02 Sep 2018

This story is so well written and I love how you continue to share a technical/set perspective between the actual sex. The use of the seals were very unique and I really like that everyone is so supportive of the other! Also, yay to feudal role play.


Sessygurl (Chapter 4) - Fri 31 Aug 2018

S9 good  you left us wanting more...I'm drolling like Kagome was. Thanks for the update. I'm patiently waiting for more. It's so worth the wait.


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