This is an interesting story. I like the concept and would like to read more. I find it nicely written.
Kagome seems more sedate about the whole marking thing more so than Sesshomaru. I think The sun goddess did what she did to show the moon god that she is innocent of what he thinks she did. She wants him to know that she still loves him but she had to get his attention so she is using Kagome and Sessho. They are now tied together I think forever. Once all the questions are answered and the truth comes out then everything should go back to normal and probably another war will break out in the heavenly realm to put things back in balance. These are my thoughts.
I think that Sesshomaru killed the guards for nothing and he should know this by now and bring them back with the Tensaiga. But he won't.
Looking forward to new updates soon.
Steph (Chapter 3) - Mon 21 Aug 2017
Great story so far.
Awesome start! Can't wait for more!
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