Magical chapter. I loved it...especially how Shippo came back into Kagome's life. It seems that young Kits that were singing might be Shippo's kits?  It will be very interesting to find out more of how the Shikon Jewel came to be in Shippo's posession and now into Kagome's hands in her era....again???

I also loved how Sessho and Kagome are now courting whether she knows it or not and does she knows that she unknowingly initiated it...lol

I am so looking forward to the next update and the one soon to come. I appreciate your time and effort that you put in to posting your wonderful stories, especially with the hectics of your RL.

Excellent job!!!

BTW Did you make up that song the Kits were singing with a little inspiration from the Bible or is it an actual song?

It's so good. Please don't have the jewel turn her into a demon.

I thought the romantic kissing scene was well done and full of passion. Great job!!!

Uh oh 

Oh, no! I think something bad gonna happen....

What!!!! Don't leave us hanging here!! I hope the stupid jewel doesn't do something weird!!! 

snap amazing again!

the scene with shippo was so touching! i felt warm!

also, the jewel reacted! i wonder what will happen now and how it will grant her wish!

thx for updating!

Oh this story is excellent. I'm really looking forward to reading about her reunion with Shippo!

Ive read both of your stories tonight. I like your writing style, your a great author and I hope you update soon. Thank you

My only complaint might be how short your chapters are, but considering I haven't managed to post anything I've written I really can't say too much lol.

Wow love this chapter 

Keep the long chapters coming! I love to see where this is going, and I'm super stoked we got some action! Can't wait for more!!

This story is so good. I cant wait for more .

So she does realise what she did yes? Is it her wish or just an impulse? 

I liked sesshoumaru and his thoughts! The youkai behaviour was well explained as well! Can't wait to see more! 

Thx for updating! 

Loved the make out part...hot

Great story! I'm loving it and how their relationship is progressing :) I'm looking forward to what comes next.

Thx for the update even though you're not well! We appreciate it. And it was a good chapter.  You have the premises for kagome to grow into herself and show her strength. Eagerly waiting for more! 

i there: I didn't get a chance to review chapter 22 but it was good. Kagome chose right in picking Sessho as her Alpha. Koga would have made her life to soft and that is not she is all about. Kagome likes challenges and Sess will give them to her.

Has she moved in with Sessho or is she there temporarily? I can't wait for their interaction turn into something more intense with a bit of romance thrown in. LOL

Kagome wants a mate that is as powerful or close to it as she is...which means it can't be anybody else but Sessho...hehehe.

Looking forward to more chapters...loving it along with your other story 'Pen Pal from Hell'.  Excellent job!

Loved this chapter and how he established his dominance! That he's the ALPHA! ....she has to learn demon ways 

I love your story. I'm have such a great time reading it.. Can't wait for more! 

Love this story, I found it when it was only 1 chapter a couple days ago, I'm assuming when you took all the chapters down and re-edited them. I love the flow and developments so far. I can relate to how kagomes feeling after being in the feudal era for so long I think I would be felt the same way coming home permanently. Also your writing is amazing! I never would be bin able to tell that English isn't your first language. You are AMAZING!!