I'm looking for changes to the story, but am not seeing any real difference between this and what was posted on Media Miner several years ago. Will that site be updates well, or are you just catching up?
Finally caught up.
The only thing I dislike is the Japanese words/phrasing sprinkled into English sentences are annoying. Names of objects that aren't easily translated and titles are to be expected, but words we have translations for - like onegai, doushite, iie, etc - are superfluous. [This is just a pet peeve that I have for all fanfiction with a Japanese source material, so it's definitely not a criticism of your work] Oh, and I couldn't care less about Inuyasha's POV, especially when at the end of feeling bad for how he treats Kago, he runs off to see his true love. So far he only feels sorry for himself, which is almost exactly how he behaved in the manga so kudos for keeping him in character. I can't wait to see his reaction once Kago & Sess' nighttime adventures are discovered.
The story is enjoyable so far. I'm really interested in seeing how you explain Kagome's interesting changes.
ponpiri (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Sep 2017
Welcome back!
I'm only on the first chapter and am going to guess this little plot will backfire on our dear Lord. How could he possibly think that his plan is any different than the others he thought of? Spells are not free will, so how will be trick his beast into thinking it is? smh @ him and how desperate he is.
j (Chapter 1) - Sun 27 Aug 2017
I love this story so far can't wait until the next update
Kim (Chapter 1) - Sat 19 Aug 2017
So excited to see your return to this site and hoping for more of your wonderful stories! Welcome back!
Terri (Chapter 1) - Sat 19 Aug 2017
Vyncent, I am so happy to see this story being repost! I loved it the first time I read it even though it was not finished. I hope this means you are going to write more. You are a wnderful story teller. I can not wait to read more.
Lorena (Chapter 2) - Sat 19 Aug 2017
I'm so happy you didn't break this chapter up, it was awesome! I'm curious about Kagome's reaction, was it all dues do that potion?
Alison (Chapter 2) - Sat 19 Aug 2017
Wow.
hope you add this story in ff.net
M.J. (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Aug 2017
Thank you for continuing to write. I like all your stories. The first fanfic that I read was the beast awakens, and I loved it. And the Poison of Erised is very interesting too.
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PRETTY PLEASE!!!
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE......
PRETTY PLEASE!!!
Lorena (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Aug 2017
I cannot begin to imagine what events will occur next, but I'm eager to find out!
Alison (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Aug 2017
Bravo Bravo Encore!!!! I want another chapter!!!
dotti (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Aug 2017
OMG!!!! It really is you lol!! I wasn't sure yet with the last story you posted but I'm like one my favorite auther writes his name like that..hmm lol. But this my favorite story!!!! I've read it sooo many times hoping to find an update to finally know what happens to Kagome. this makes me so happy! It will good to see now thank you!!!
dotti (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Aug 2017
OMG!!!! It really is you lol!! I wasn't sure yet with the last story you posted but I'm like one my favorite auther writes his name like that..hmm lol. But this my favorite story!!!! I've read it sooo many times hoping to find an update to finally know what happens to Kagome. ???? this makes me so happy! It will good to see now thank you!!!????????????????????????
Me encanta yo la leí en adult.fanfic . Me parece que no está terminada la historia, espero que se la puedas terminar ésta vez
Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Aug 2017
Hi!
Just curious is that a repost of this fic or a rewrite?
I remember it from a long time ago so wondering if it will change somehow?
In rest thx for posting! Will be waiting for more!
Great chapter and welcome back. Well done, lots of detail and I like the glossary at the end. I like the amount of background story you have when dealing with sesshomaru. No sudden actions or kagome running from inuyasha or being alone. I love how you almost stress the fact that it took him months to do everything and that even before then he was watching or thinking of kagome. But with her being a powerful miko wouldn't she simply purify the potion? If so sesshomaru would have to find some other means of obtaining her. Where is shippou in all this? even young that he is, he might be able to smell or sense the magic of the potion. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
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