Finally! A sequel!!! This was a great follow up!
As far as your previous story, I thought you did a great job keeping the balance of humor and angst. The story showed two mature individuals coming to an understanding of where they went wrong. Yes, Sesshomaru was wrong to leave her the way he did, but Kagome called him out on it and came to realize that she hurt him too. He had another lover while they were apart, but, then, so did she, and they both realized no one else could compare. Anyway, I hope you don't get too discouraged. I thought "This is the Worst" was very well written, and actually found it very funny. Keep it up!
Natalia (Chapter 1) - Thu 27 Jul 2017
I get it that you showed small details of his remorse, like when he was telling it wasn't her, I mean the one he bedded and he admitted he was a coward next to her but I still believe it was too soon! I get he would never say the words, an apology can go a long way but it's not his way yes?! She suffered more and even became addicted to alcohol! For me this was not a comedy but a life drama! I am not sure she was always so harsh and cursed or it's just she became like this after his betrayal, it's unclear, but the way I see it he ruined her so I would expect some apologies not just him admitting that it was the worst mistake of his life. but that it's just kagome! Glad they had a happy ending! I am so happy! Now I have closure! Thx a lot for posting!
It was a fun read. It spoke directly to my dysfunctional and happy family. It's hard to live with them, but it even harder to live without them. I won't change a thing about them. Keep up the good storie.
Nicole (Chapter 1) - Thu 27 Jul 2017
That was awesome! I had a great laugh while reading all the vignettes :)
I enjoyed this story and thought it was funny. Do you plan on doing one that has them raising their kid? That would be awesome!
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