Page 3 of 4
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 4 Next > End >>
hw (Chapter 12) - Thu 30 Nov 2017

Loving this story! I have a hunch I'm also gonna love Sesshoumaru's teacher as well! I bet she's feisty old dog. ;)


anna1989 (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Nov 2017

Response to 

SammyJams comment on Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Oct 2017

To put it shortly....I highly disagree with
your last sentence ;)

 


 

 

 


anna1989 (Chapter 12) - Thu 30 Nov 2017

Beautiful story!!!!! oh my goodness! I'm glad I happened upon this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)  A new favorite <3


I love where you're going with this story & I will continue to read until it's "never ending" end ^^

Arigato!!!!!!!!!!

g luck 


Ryo chan (Chapter 10) - Sun 19 Nov 2017

Yay, lol he was so mad can't wait for your next update 


Ree-san (Chapter 10) - Sat 18 Nov 2017

I actually think she has it reversed. That perhaps it would be that wolf and dog demons had a shared ancestry, then wolves branched off and then dogs. I don't think the evolution would go backwards. 


genesis (Chapter 9) - Sun 12 Nov 2017

Looking forward to more of this hilarious wonderful story. The sexual tension woohoo...of the carts lolz.

Amazing work!~


nicole (Chapter 8) - Fri 20 Oct 2017

I'm confused I thought sees Ho u Mary was lord of the west and in u Tasha was the the prince


SammyJams (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Oct 2017

as much as I’m enjoying this story so far, and I definitely am enjoying it, it keeps bothering me how much of a bitch Kagome is in this. She just seems sort of cold and unfeeling in this. 


blueanimegeek (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Oct 2017

Love! I can't wait to read more!!


Susy V (Chapter 6) - Thu 10 Aug 2017

Oh gosh, please tell me it wasn't Shippo! That's the first thing I thought. And I'm really loving the story. Well written and great portrayal of both characters.


GreyEcho (Chapter 6) - Sun 30 Jul 2017

Not sure if the last one posted but I love your fic! Laughed out loud in a lot of places and can't wait to read more. Their reactions to things are great! Especially Kagome's. XD


Ryo chan (Chapter 6) - Fri 28 Jul 2017

I'm loving this so far, so much so I want to read everything else you've written, can't wait for your next chapter!! Also hope your not in pain... 


Miss C (Chapter 6) - Mon 24 Jul 2017

So glad you are back. I really love this story. Definitely a fresh take for the relationship between these two.


Eryn (Chapter 6) - Mon 24 Jul 2017

I like the route you decided to take with Sesshoumaru's feeding habits and instincts.  People get so caught up in the Sess/Kag romance angle that they fail to appreciate the other intricacies that can be derived from the characters.  He isn't human, and these moments are gold.


Natalia (Chapter 6) - Sun 23 Jul 2017

That scene with the fox was a little disturbing! You should put a warning please? 

Hm on another note... I don't believe kagome is sasy but just... Er different? She can be strong without acting like a witch! It's your fic but if you use an already created character you can't majorly change it, since this is canon no? Kagome is compassionate and forgiving! Yes inuyasha was overstepping his bounds but she forgave a feral inuyasha who stuck his claws in her arms, forgave the ones who almost killed her and always kidnapped her it's just the change is too drastic and too soon? Today she is like this then suddenly she is a witch, and she is one, and about the studying? I study a lot but am not acting and ignoring my friends or family, so if there isn't a more deep reason it's ilogical how she acts. Sorry it's just rubs me the wrong way to see kagome this way! Anyway I wish you good luck with your writing and hope that was not shippo he ate!


Leaora (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Jul 2017

This. You. It's.....everything! Please, please update frequently! I love that the story is plot driven and still has comedy woven throughout. I just can't  wait for Kags to have to fulfill  her obligation to scratch Sessy''s back and allow him to do the same because of course he misconstrued the metaphor. Oh, and I hope her scent lingers on the end of Mokomoko until he gIves in to the attraction.


Nathaniel z Alexandria (Chapter 5) - Mon 17 Jul 2017

While I love that you didn't make Kagome into a whimsy little leaf who is always crying, I don't like the fact you made her into a complete and utter be-atch. One can be sassy without acting like she is on top of everyone. Although it is hypothetically possible for Kagome to act like this towards Sesshomaru. Her treatment of Inuyasha, to me, does not make sense. Yes he had roughly felt her up and cut her lip, but, it was by accident and he even stopped when asked. He could have continued until her screaming no snapped him out of his lust. And then there is the studying. I know studying is important. He'll, I study nearly everyday for hours on end. But the way Kagome is ignoring Inuyasha is close to being cruel. Is she was so intent on studying then she would have no time for her friends in the future. Because I know if I am busy studying to the extent that Kagome is studying I will not be contacting anybody. It seems more that she is trying to slowly distance herself from the past while using studying/college as an excuse. I may not be finished with the story as of yet, but I hope you are planning to give Kagome a complete 180 to realize that she is being a part.

Otherwise great story.


Eryn (Chapter 5) - Mon 17 Jul 2017

Also, in regards to Kagome's attitude, it great.  She was pretty selfless in mucj of the show and books, but she always had that sassy streak that people tend to forget.  It's important to remember ALL aspects of a character rather than what people see as more acceptable for use.  It lends to more realistic characterization.  

 

Example, every te she gets annoyed by Jakken.

Her fristration with her friends back home.

Her annoyance with Hojo.

Her relationship with Sota.

 

She has the capacity to be super nice, but you see her attitude seep out around people she is comfortable with or sees as a threat or unworthy of friendship.  

 

She's not docile, and I love that you didn't make her into a simpering whimp.


Eryn (Chapter 5) - Mon 17 Jul 2017

I absolutely love this portrayal of Sesshoumaru.  I've seen the same sort of characterization in few other stories where his outward appearance and attitude is that cold, aloof, uncaring demon we are all fond of, but what goes on in his head is so much more interesting.  I love that he spaces out and, like Kagome, has incomplete, stuttered thoughts like the rest of us.  His attitude internally lends to the outer bits we already know.


stephanie (Chapter 5) - Sun 16 Jul 2017

LOVE THIS STORY> <3


Page 3 of 4
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 4 Next > End >>

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.