I lkie the stiry so much..can't wait their meeting for the next chapter

I havent watched Revenge, so I'm absolutely smitten with your story. I love me a classic love triangle. Thank you for keeping them soo in character. The setting, tone, the world they live in and the people in them are so well written. What happened between them!! He proposed? why couldn't she marry him since he's part of the same family?! So is she planning to leave inuyasha? He seems so sweet and undeserving. His love for her makes any woman jealous! Anyway.. this tension between S/K is killing me. Why can't they be together already. I love a strong Kagome but theres always a way!! what's up her sleeves? I CANNOT wait for more! One of my fav stories of late. Thank you for writing this 

Damn, I waited ages for an update I like the storyline however, Kagome lying and turning to another brother bites I don't like her right now she's a two timing bitch that should be fucked over ten times and Sesshomaru should kill her and say fuck off....  but we know that won't happen.  But one could be hopefull.  Anyways update soon would like to know her reasons for deceiving Sesshomaru besides Naraku killing her family.  That's too old.

I like this story already. It is very nicely written. Great start to the story.

Kagome is just too soft and not thinking of herself. She always seems to get herself in so much trouble or gets a broken heart. This time it's her own fault. I don't mean to sound cruel but Inuyasha showing back up after breaking her heart by leaving telling her he does not love her all of sudden showing back up after being gone for a long time saying "I'm dying"....sounds rather selfish to me. Why would he show back up now when she has told him that she has moved on and is seeing someone else and telling her he needs her for the short time he has left...that is so over dramatic and did I say selfish. I guess I would have said I am sorry to hear that but not going to happen buddy. I'll be your friend but not getting back together. She would have to give up her love for Sessho to eventually end up being a widow.

Great job. Looking forward to more chapters...update soon.

I am loving this so far!!!

Awesome start to this story! Can't wait for more!!!

I can't wait to see how sessh feels about all this information.

Very interesting and intriguing start! I am excited to read more :) I also really like how you've written Sesshomaru's character so far - I wonder if he is as hands-y as his younger brother lol

Hope to see an update soon!!

You have an interesting storyline here. I like when Kagome is made to be a little more human. I'd love to see Sesshomaru expose her to InuYasha. No matter what happens I am certainly looking forward to reading more.

looking forward to more  especially why she walked out  

I know there must be more to this, but I don't like this kagome! Curious how you'll spin this!