Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Aug 2017

I like this story already. It is very nicely written. Great start to the story.

Kagome is just too soft and not thinking of herself. She always seems to get herself in so much trouble or gets a broken heart. This time it's her own fault. I don't mean to sound cruel but Inuyasha showing back up after breaking her heart by leaving telling her he does not love her all of sudden showing back up after being gone for a long time saying "I'm dying"....sounds rather selfish to me. Why would he show back up now when she has told him that she has moved on and is seeing someone else and telling her he needs her for the short time he has left...that is so over dramatic and did I say selfish. I guess I would have said I am sorry to hear that but not going to happen buddy. I'll be your friend but not getting back together. She would have to give up her love for Sessho to eventually end up being a widow.

Great job. Looking forward to more chapters...update soon.

 


His Lady (Chapter 2) - Wed 16 Aug 2017

I am loving this so far!!!


SammyJams (Chapter 2) - Wed 16 Aug 2017

Awesome start to this story! Can't wait for more!!!


Couldntbekeener3 (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Aug 2017

I can't wait to see how sessh feels about all this information.


Blommie8 (Chapter 1) - Thu 06 Jul 2017

Eve Nighte (Chapter 1) - Wed 05 Jul 2017

Very interesting and intriguing start! I am excited to read more :) I also really like how you've written Sesshomaru's character so far - I wonder if he is as hands-y as his younger brother lol

Hope to see an update soon!!


candy cane (Chapter 1) - Wed 05 Jul 2017

You have an interesting storyline here. I like when Kagome is made to be a little more human. I'd love to see Sesshomaru expose her to InuYasha. No matter what happens I am certainly looking forward to reading more.


Toni (Chapter 1) - Wed 05 Jul 2017

looking forward to more  especially why she walked out  

 


Natalia (Chapter 1) - Wed 05 Jul 2017

I know there must be more to this, but I don't like this kagome! Curious how you'll spin this!


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