Very interesting story. I cant wait for you to update, but i'm still wondering if Sango should really tell Sessy and Kagome about the curse but i think they have truely fallen in love with one another. Well i guess they have a right to know. and to make things worse Ayame is pregnant too, wow cant wait to see how this is going to turn out.
what a wonderful update! and i'm so glad you did! i'm so happy your muse seems to have kicked back in! I dunno whats gunna happen, but i'm pleased either way, i wonder how Ayami and Kagome will get along. And i must be honest i like what you did with rin and shippo. so many make them instantly like one another, its more likly that one would in fact hate the other or both, b/c they'd think that the other is stealing a parent! either way again i'm so0o0o0o happy to see more, and i'm gald i recommended the story too! - r0o
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! r0o must have more!!!! you must update! i'll fanart if you update!! i dunno what but i will i swear to you!!!! *shameless brinb for fantastic fiction!*
-r0o :D
| I'm really into this story. I love reading stories about Kagome and Sesshoumaru being mated. I'm just so afraid for them to be told about the curse. Except for one thing. For the curse to work on them like it did, there would have to have been an attraction between them to begin with even if they were unaware of it by not wanting to admit it to themselves. That would have to be pointed out to them so they could believe that the love is real and not completely based on a curse. The curse only forced their hidden feelings out for each other. Otherwise, I think their relationship might begin to fall apart with doubts in each other's true feelings for each other, curse or not. I don't want their love to start to fall apart when they learn of the curse, please. They have to have faith in each other that their love is real. What you've done with Shippo is something completely new and different. All other stories I've read always have him and Rin liking each other and playing together. They've never had one to be jealous of the other or mentioned the trait that all demons go through a blood lust phase when young. I like this new bit of information in the life of a demon. I wonder what Sesshoumaru did when he went through his that he doesn't want to remember. I think he should tell Kagome so she won't feel so guilty over Shippo. I like how often you're updating. Too many authors let weeks go by between updates which takes away from the enjoyment of reading a story. You lose the mood of the story and constantly have to backtrack in your reading to refresh your memory and mood to catch up to the new chapter.
InuPriestess (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Oct 2008
| I have currently finished chapter 9 and saw that you had no reviews yet and I thought to myself..."for shame on all your houses!!" O.O
this is really good and I hope more people read this and review because it is unique in its storyline and you are still keeping sesshoumaru in character..silent but with an ever-watchful eye.. good job and I can't wait to read more... *by the way I am about to do*....Ja! =D
| this is a great storyline I like the interation between Sess and Kags even if Sess is a is a little oc.
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