Very compelling chapter and nicely written. Sad about Rin...considering the life span of humans back then, since it took Rin a long time to re-adjust, did she ever fall in love and marry? Also is Sessho's son a hanyou like inuyasha with the ears or is he a full demon like his father? Just wondering because Kagome being a powerful priestess that maybe in this story her children would be full demon because of the power of both parents. Just curious :)
Keep up the good work and looking forward to future updates soon.
ponpiri (Chapter 2) - Sun 09 Jul 2017
Aw.. It's always Rin going through that. I would have liked to have heard a bit more questions from Katsuo, but otherwise another intriguing chapter. You mixed up 'quite' and 'quiet' towards the end.
As soon as you wrote glutton, I thought of Inuyasha and all that ramen.
Natalia (Chapter 2) - Fri 07 Jul 2017
i just love how you bring new depths to sesshoumaru's character. you show his innermost, while still keeping him as himself! your language is also very pleasant it flows well and is understandable, i love it! plus the thing with the sins blew my mind away! you did a very good job! thx for posting this, will be waiting for more!
This is an intriguing start to an interesting story. I like this from Sessho's POV. It's like Inu Papa talking to his son and now Sessho talking to his son. Almost like a carry over from papa to son and son to son. What Sess is teling his son is like life lessons that he learned along the way and he is passing little tidbits of his life on to his son to learn. His achievements, mistakes, failures and victories.
Very nice writing. Looking forward to future updates.
ponpiri (Chapter 1) - Sat 01 Jul 2017
Interesting. I've been looking for a story from Sesshoumaru's POV with him being in character and not some strange "humanized" version of himself.
The voice you give Katsuo is really strong and distinct and your use of commas makes me so happy. I'll be following along.
Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sat 01 Jul 2017
Hm interesting concept.. will be keeping an eye on this! Good luck with the writing!
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